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Sparkling Water

   (9 reviews)
Genres: Fantasy, Romance

A music artist is hiding from his bodyguard.

Copyright © 2024 Secret Author; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (12 members)

  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 4
  • Characters 9
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 5
  • Feel-Good 8
  • Humor 10
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 9
  • World Building 4

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    • 51 Comments

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Jason Rimbaud

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

If you are looking for a unique take on the sirens of the past who lure sailors to their demise, you won't be disappointed. There are sexy singers, long-suffering bodyguards, water (with or without sparkles), and a fun introduction to something I've not familiar with. Great fun story by a talented SA.

Response from the author:

"With or without sparkles" - I love it! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 🥰

  • Love 3
  • Haha 1
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kbois

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

This is a well-written, fun story with a touch of humor and a bit of the unusual sprinkled in.  

Read on to see what happens between a singer and his body guard and their extra abilities.  

Nice job! 

Response from the author:

Aaaaaaaaahhhh! Thank you so much! 🥰

  • Love 4
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astone2292

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

This little story checked all of my short story likes. Out of the ordinary? Yep! Kept my attention? Yes'sir! Gave me a few giggles? Teehee!

An excellent story to start off this year's Secret Author contest!

Response from the author:

Glad you enjoyed it! 

  • Love 5
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Headstall

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

Definitely worth a few minutes of anyone's time. Very engaging and refreshing story. Cheers!

Response from the author:

Glad you enjoyed it, Gary! 🥰

  • Love 6
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Albert1434

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

A very enjoyable story! With great perfect dialogue and very enjoyable story line which left me wanting more! Well done mystery writer!

Response from the author:

Glad you enjoyed this one!

  • Love 6
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Gary L

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

A funny, quirky tale from another world. Suitable not only for aquatic kin but also human kin like us!  As for the author, a complete mystery.

Response from the author:

"Kin" was what I settled on to not call them sirens...because if I did, I would have to figure out what the other elements would be and so I lumped them all into just different "kin." 😂

  • Love 6
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W_L

· Edited by W_L

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

A short light-hearted modern fantasy story about a singer and his bodyguard.

This is a fun offbeat story with things that are common and fantastical. Fans of Urban fantasy will see familiar elements.

Response from the author:

I was trying to break my brain trying to figure out the categories for this one and here you go and drop the magic words "Urban Fantasy" that for some reason evaded me this whole time.🤣

  • Love 8
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Bill W

   7 of 7 members found this review helpful 7 / 7 members

A short, light-hearted, and enjoyable read, with a little humor and a little mystery involved.  The characters are compelling, with each having their own unique quirks, and the story ends on a happy and upbeat note. 

Response from the author:

It's no The Bodyguard, that's for sure! 😂 Hope it brought a smile to your face.

  • Love 8
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chris191070

· Edited by chris191070

   8 of 8 members found this review helpful 8 / 8 members

We meet Nilus, a young man who is hiding from his bodyguard.

As to why he hiding from his bodyguard, you’ll need to read this light hearted story, to find out.

Congratulations to our mystery author, on a fun read.

Response from the author:

Glad you enjoyed it! Just one of my many plot bunnies hopping about in my head that I managed to eek out without having to go full throttle for once.

  • Love 9
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