Holding Back 1. Marvel Universe Fanfic

I didn't know who Deadpool was before I read this story (I've watched the movies now). It didn't matter, I was hooked from the first chapter, and I laughed my way through most of the story. In fact, reading this story made me understand him in a way which I'm sure enhanced my enjoyment of the movies. 

Thorn did a fantastic job of making me believe in how a relationship between these two comic characters is not only reasonable, but perfect too. And Deadpool's interaction with those boxes is some of the funniest dialogue I've ever read.

I loved the story from start to finish, along with how it somehow read like a real comic issue. Not a single chapter was boring, and everything flowed well. I enjoyed the progression. The action, the bantering, the build-up, the drama, the plot, and even the smut was all well-written. Nothing felt rushed or slow. 

I'm not normally a fan of stories written in present tense. But , if you're the same way, I ask that you please overlook it. Why? Well, present tense is actually quite fitting for a story that has the flow of a comic book issue. The flow and direction which with this author writes will not lead you astray. This author's a storyteller through and through. 

It was a very rewarding read!