Jump to content

  • Join For Free and Get Notified of New Chapters!

    Are you enjoying a great story and want to get an alert or email when a new chapter is posted? Join now for free and follow your favorite stories and authors!  You can even choose to get daily or weekly digest emails instead of getting flooded with an email for each story you follow. 

     

Tollbooth Operator

   (1 review)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

Frankie loves his job. He's good at it too. But events conspire to set him adrift.

 

Grid & Dice prompt: A neurotic tollbooth operator hides in an inner city one-star no-tell motel because: "Fuck, they saw me!"

This story is part of the Grid & Dice Game started by Cia.

Copyright © 2017 Timothy M.; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (1 member)

  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 1
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 0
  • Like 6
  • Love 5
Select Chapter
Table of Contents

Recommended Comments

User Feedback

View Guidelines

Create an account or sign in to leave a review

You need to be a member in order to leave a review

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
Caz Pedroso

Caz Pedroso 44,999

   1 of 2 members found this review helpful 1 / 2 members

Another intriguing read from Tim. His use of the prompt he received is imaginative and well thought out.

I felt so sorry for Frankie, he was just doing his job and he ended up entangled in someone else's mess. The police and DA try to reassure him but it is hard for him to understand what is happening.

Tim leaves it up to the reader to decide on what happens at the end, so why not give it a gander and if you have time leave a comment for him. 

As always a highly recommended read

Response from the author:

Thank you for a great review, Caz. I did despair a little over the prompt, but once I got the initial idea of Frankie in the booth, the story took off. But I really need to get him out of that motel. :lol:

  • Like 1
  • Love 1
Link to review

  • Newsletter

    You probably have a crazy and hectic schedule and find it hard to keep up with everything going on.  We get it, because we feel it too.  Signing up here is a great way to keep in touch and find something relaxing to read when you get a few moments to spare.

    Sign Up
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

Our Privacy Policy can be found here: Privacy Policy. We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue..

  I accept