Rhymes - 1. We'll Never Know.

Nothing is guaranteed in a relationship. In fact, a divorce, death or breakup in a relationship is one of the top stressors of life. The thing is to move on, which is not covered in this work. Tragic poetry is always two sided. Always asks questions. Romeo and Juliet is a prime example. Bolt's, Sir Thomas Moore is another. Human nature is such that we assume too much, expect too much and analyse too much. Nothing hurts more than live lost, and sometimes we are left to figure it out alone, and in the process, on the rebound, we hurt others.it's an unavoidable cycle. Nice work.

There are no words. Your use of language is just phenomenal.

 

And the night would weave my dreams in your image?

Just beautiful.

I am struggling to move on from a past relationship myself right now and this really hit home with me. When we decide to leave relationships, we can't predict that years down the road we will still be desperately in love, even when new loves are in the picture. Nothing can ease the pain of not knowing what might have been.

On 03/03/2014 08:06 PM, Aaron Penrose said:

There are no words. Your use of language is just phenomenal.

 

And the night would weave my dreams in your image?

Just beautiful.

I am struggling to move on from a past relationship myself right now and this really hit home with me. When we decide to leave relationships, we can't predict that years down the road we will still be desperately in love, even when new loves are in the picture. Nothing can ease the pain of not knowing what might have been.

This is the first poem I've written on GA. :\

On 03/03/2014 06:48 PM, LJH said:

Nothing is guaranteed in a relationship. In fact, a divorce, death or breakup in a relationship is one of the top stressors of life. The thing is to move on, which is not covered in this work. Tragic poetry is always two sided. Always asks questions. Romeo and Juliet is a prime example. Bolt's, Sir Thomas Moore is another. Human nature is such that we assume too much, expect too much and analyse too much. Nothing hurts more than live lost, and sometimes we are left to figure it out alone, and in the process, on the rebound, we hurt others.it's an unavoidable cycle. Nice work.

Contemporary life is obsessed with moving on, from experience to experience. "Hurry or you might let your life pass you by" is one thing I've heard too many times. True as it is and necessary for us not to dwell in the failures of the past but is it not crucial to take the time to mourn and breathe, when life just seems to constantly knock the breath out of us?

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Wow. That poem just blew me away. I don't normally read poetry, but I've read a few things from you in the past that really impressed me, so I thought I'd give this a go.

Half-a-box of Kleenex later...it was such a beautiful poem, totallyy. Your imagery and detail and the words you chose to use, were simply beautiful.

Thank you.

On 03/04/2014 01:55 AM, Lisa said:

Wow. That poem just blew me away. I don't normally read poetry, but I've read a few things from you in the past that really impressed me, so I thought I'd give this a go.

 

Half-a-box of Kleenex later...it was such a beautiful poem, totallyy. Your imagery and detail and the words you chose to use, were simply beautiful.

 

Thank you.

I'm glad you enjoyed the poetry.

Thank you for giving the poem a chance to touch you.