Hello   So I'm a bit of a newbie here, and I've only just properly realised what this space is for   So here's your chance to discuss anything relating to my first story (both ever, and on this site) Cal.  I wrote it a couple of years ago and was my first ever attempt at fiction.  It was originally posted elsewhere, and whilst there has been some minor re-editing, it's more or less as originally produced, plus another couple of chapters.   As a writer, like so many others hav