Com, personally i imagine myself in Wesley's shoes. I do in fact agree with many points in ur story, like people following someone else's idea of fun even if it is not what they wud like do 4 fun. Yes i see myself as a wolf in a herd of sheep and imagine punks like me to come along and set me free.
To be able to do whatever whenever with whoever i want to, that idea appeals to me immensely. hence my natural inclination towards the story.
all the mysteriousness and exposing the dark side in humanity has me gripped. ur treatment of the dark side of human nature as normal, even liberating is a fresh perspective in the prententious goodie goodie world.
i'll shut up now, hehe. i hope i have given u enough reasons 4 u to expedite ur work on this story.
Sean.