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  1. paren01

    Chapter 8

    I think you’re right. There are still mysteries to unfold.
  2. paren01

    Chapter 8

    Good insight. Youthful angst and finding their direction is one of the reasons I enjoy writing Young Adult fiction.
  3. paren01

    Chapter 8

    The St. Olaf reference is hilarious. I read about a town in south central Minnesota called New Ulm that has a high percentage of people with German ancestry and was looked upon suspiciously by the government between WWI and WWII. I know it’s nothing like that now, but a fictional place like that might be receptive to Ahnenerbe in the ‘30s.
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    Chapter 8

    Good questions as usual. A ten to fifteen percent bump from generation to generation is probably manageable. We all have friends that are little smarter or less smart than we are. An over than thirty present bump is more obvious and liable to cause friction. Makes me wonder if the scientists that designed the program in the 1930s anticipated Gen 6 and planned for the discord.
  5. paren01

    Chapter 8

    Teenagers can be impulsive, although in this case, I think, Jakob gave it some thought.
  6. paren01

    Chapter 8

    A little home schooling never hurts!
  7. paren01

    Chapter 8

    The first time is always special. Not always in a good way, but Matt and Jakob got lucky.
  8. paren01

    Chapter 8

    It’s particularly nice when feelings are reciprocated. Thanks for commenting.
  9. ** “It’s OK,” I said. “Emma, it won’t work for Oscar and me, and it won’t work for you and Frank. Give it a shot. I want you and Oscar to be happy.” She looked at me with a sober expression and said. “I couldn’t do that.” “I want you to. Please.” ** “I’ll think about it,” said Emma. “But I’m worried about you.” “Don’t worry, I’ll be OK.” I tried to convince myself as much as Emma. “I’ll tell Oscar that he can ask you out.” She took my hand with a sorry look and
  10. paren01

    Chapter 7

    I get it.
  11. paren01

    Chapter 7

    There are sometimes lows before the highs. Don’t forget Ralph.
  12. paren01

    Chapter 7

    Life’s like that sometimes and it’s more painful, the first time around.
  13. paren01

    Chapter 7

    Good observations. Goes to show, that being perfect, isn’t perfect. This is my first first person POV story. I’m still trying to find my way. Thanfs for the comment.
  14. paren01

    Chapter 7

    Matt’s in a bad place. Will it affect his judgement? Thanks for commenting.
  15. paren01

    Chapter 7

    I think you’re right about the danger at home. Thanks for the comment.
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