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My poor brother stuck in a snow drift and he still manages to make it funny love ya

I really enjoyed reading this. I want to see, taste and feel what the author is trying to write, so I appreciate details in a story and you have done a awesome job. I found Max going full circle with his thoughts. What person doesn't when they come back to a place they started from after being gone many years. His thoughts drift off to a time when he was having problems with his father but at the same time he was able to find love, even if it was short lived. Great Job Ron.

Loved it!!!! Hope you are going to write more about Sam and Jeremy, soon. Cant wait to see what happens next

Great Job!! Loved the poem

For someone who has read a lot of your writings, I must say this is just a wonderful read. I found it cheerful and full of memories of childhood. Time has no meaning when your a child regardless if your in the fairy world or not. I found it heart felt especially when he meets him again years later as an adult. The whole trust issue but also of remembrance when he held the bird in his hands was a very touching part of the story. I have read lots of fantasy fiction novels throughout my life I think most of them I have to give you credit for introducing them to me, lol. Anyways, you did a wonderful job Ron. Hope to keep reading more from you soon.