This was one of the most powerful stories I’ve read for a long time. @CasualWanderer82, you should feel really proud of what you produced. I was totally drawn into the narrative and shared with the emotions of all the characters, but none more so than Bishop. You led me deep into his mind in a way that only rarely happens. I was completely captivated and I know already that I’ll come back and read the whole story again - it absolutely deserves it. Thank you so much.