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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Dirty Little Whore - 1. Poem

Cold and dreary
Icy to the touch
her voice drawn and eerie
he pushed her to much

He pushed and prodded
forced her to far
made her snap
and leave him dead with that scar

Silent and shy
she was petit and weak
that young girl
quiet and meek

His fetish was fulfilled
with that slender young throat...
that wanted desperately,
a new crimson coat

He pushed and tortured
defiled and beat,
to the mantra of
"you deserve this my sweet"

so often she heard this
she often believed
she was rotten disgusting,
deserved it!!
this thought would never leave

Even when he'd stop
she'd be constantly scarred
by that fat ugly bastard...
the pig made of lard

But one night she flipped
she knew not she would
she barely believed
that one day she could?

He threw her to the bed,
with a punch to face
he tore at those "expensive" clothes
the red satin and lace

He said she was common a whore
that she should dress the part
Her asking for her knee high socks
should of broke his heart

The man was perverse...
sadistic malicious
he got a kick... he
thought her begging quite delicious

As he crawled up her body
slamming hers to the bed
taking from her...
what she should save till she be wed

As he forced his fat greasy body
against hers, his tongue down her throat
the beer and smoke, a putrid
mixture, made her choke

She snapped finally
instinct raging as he penetrated
what she would do
was quite belated

She reached in his pants
strewn on the floor
she took her instrument
to make him do this no more

The irony, as she held
his own pocket knife
she would use this
to end his life

As he moaned and grunted
and slammed into her body
she raised the blade and stabbed
a shot quit unshody

He raised his head from her neck,
and gasped for life, air, breath
as he looked into her eyes... he saw
nothing, no life only his death

Lay there... blood running over her,
her eyes blank
her soul dead
her whole body lank

She was in shock, and to this day still is,
her only words a faint cry of
"why daddy why??"

 
 
Copyright © 2011 Excuse; All Rights Reserved.
Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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I enjoyed this and, in fact, didn't see the outcome you'd planned. Some nice touches. Just pointed out a few typos in bold.

 

 

 

Cold and dreary

Icy to the touch

her voice drawn and eerie

he pushed her too much

 

He pushed and prodded

forced her too far

made her snap

and leave him dead with that scar

 

Silent and shy

she was petite and weak

that young girl

quiet and meek

 

His fetish was fulfilled

with that slender young throat...

that wanted desperately,

a new crimson coat

 

He pushed and tortured

defiled and beat,

to the mantra of

"you deserve this my sweet"

 

so often she heard this

she often believed

she was rotten disgusting,

deserved it!!

this thought would never leave

 

Even when he'd stop

she'd be constantly scarred

by that fat ugly bastard...

the pig made of lard

 

But one night she flipped

she knew not she would

she barely believed

that one day she could?

 

He threw her to the bed,

with a punch to face

he tore at those "expensive" clothes

the red satin and lace

 

He said she was common a whore

that she should dress the part

Her asking for her knee high socks

should have broke his heart

 

The man was perverse...

sadistic malicious

he got a kick... he

thought her begging quite delicious

 

As he crawled up her body

slamming hers to the bed

taking from her...

what she should save till she be wed

 

As he forced his fat greasy body

against hers, his tongue down her throat

the beer and smoke, a putrid

mixture, made her choke

 

She snapped finally

instinct raging as he penetrated

what she would do

was quite belated

 

She reached in his pants

strewn on the floor

she took her instrument

to make him do this no more

 

The irony, as she held

his own pocket knife

she would use this

to end his life

 

As he moaned and grunted

and slammed into her body

she raised the blade and stabbed

a shot (quit unshody?)

 

He raised his head from her neck,

and gasped for life, air, breath

as he looked into her eyes... he saw

nothing, no life only his death

 

Lay there... blood running over her,

her eyes blank

her soul dead

her whole body lank

 

She was in shock, and to this day still is,

her only words a faint cry of

"why daddy why??"

 

 

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