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2010 - Spring - I'd Never Do That Entry

Falling Leaves - 1. Poem

FALLING LEAVES

By Bugeye

 



Did you do what I asked you to do

A rainy day

I love denial

Well it is dead now

You scared me... Never do that, sneak up on me

Gone to ground

I would never do that

Look to the sky

Watch out

One last time

I don't love you, much

Peaceful dreamer

I am mad... Never do that when I am mad

I will hear for you

What a kiss... I should never do that

I will see for you

Move over

I will speak for you

You must be joking

I will feel for you

I am driving... Never do that when I am driving

I will remember you

What touch you... I would never do that

I will lie on the ground here with you

That hurts

I will stop my heart for you

You are out of your mind

I will cry for you

I am on the phone... Never do that when I am on the phone

You know I love you

What, look at you... I might never do that again

I told you didn't I

You are doing it all wrong

This doesn't end here

For the last time, stop

The sun is coming out

I am dressing... Never do that when I am dressing

There is a damn rainbow

What grab you... I never do that

You know what I am trying to say

If I wanted it there, I would of put it there

This is the last time

Don't ever leave me. I would never do that

Are you laughing at me

I would never do that

Are you crying

I would never do that


 

© 2010 Bugeye

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2010 - Spring - I'd Never Do That Entry
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After a first reading , what is it? a grieving lover, a spoilt child, a driver distracted by a loved one, a unfaithful lover, a wronged lover??? It is beautiful how you can read and understand in a number of ways. It is beautiful how it is crafted, how long must it have taken, how I wish I could do something like it. After reading it a number of times, I think I know what it means, but beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Everyone should read it and take their own meaning away. Excellent, a number of times over.

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On 02/09/2011 08:06 AM, Red_A said:
After a first reading , what is it? a grieving lover, a spoilt child, a driver distracted by a loved one, a unfaithful lover, a wronged lover??? It is beautiful how you can read and understand in a number of ways. It is beautiful how it is crafted, how long must it have taken, how I wish I could do something like it. After reading it a number of times, I think I know what it means, but beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Everyone should read it and take their own meaning away. Excellent, a number of times over.
You are very kind, and I thank you.
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