[Linxe Termoil] Sunny's Angel

[Linxe Termoil]

Reviews for Sunny's Angel as of 08 December 2010

 

Title: 9: A first date and the day goes to hell. Reviewer: Morebern

 

Seriously! Where did the rest of the story go??? I just sat

here and read it all in the last 2 hours and you STOPPED WRITING IT!

Grrrr!!! --Amelia

Date: 05/09/2010 09:15 PM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: 9: A first date and the day goes to hell. Reviewer: anordwell

 

I was really confused when I started reading this story. You had a

couple of "main" characters that had pretty complicated histories to

fill in. But the writing flows really well and you got the back story

out in a way that I understood without a bunch of flashbacks which tend

to be distracting. I am not sure whether or not I like Devin, you

totally have me on the fence about him. You seem to be able to bring out

so many different facets of his personality, I am never sure what he is

going to do or how he is going to react next. I sympathize with his

parents, lol. I hope you continue this story sometime.

Date: 10/17/2009 11:48 PM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: 9: A first date and the day goes to hell. Reviewer: taina1959

 

Oh boy! Sunny needs some anger control treatment! And Ian needs to

back off a little bit. After all, he's been missing from Sunny's life

for most of his life. Great Chapter Linxe!!! Can't wait to read 10!

Date: 07/30/2009 10:30 AM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: 9: A first date and the day goes to hell. Reviewer: David McLeod

 

Linxe has created a complex world populated with complex

characters, yet he offers up every moment, every incident slowly,

carefully, deliberately, giving us a chance to savor every subtlety.

That the characters are fallible makes them even more real.

Date: 07/30/2009 06:03 AM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: 9: A first date and the day goes to hell. Reviewer: Nephylim

 

This is a really awesome story. Shame Devin is gay because I am

in love with him. I really hope that whatever he's up to it turns out

alright in the end.

I like that way that all the relationships are developing so

naturally with all the ups and downs, misunderstandings and epiphanies

of real life. I also like the fact the none of the characters are

perfect. They all have their doubts and neuroses.

I love Devin. I want to have his babies. :PAuthor's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it too....and....hrm, I want his babies too

LT

Date: 07/29/2009 11:07 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 8: The Awakening of Demons Reviewer: Cuba Libre

 

Looks like Sunny has a bit of a temper on him, which no doubt makes him & Devin a perfect match. Really like this story.Author's Response: I

didn't really consider Sunny having a temper, just not being grown up.

Could that childishness hinder the fostering of a true partnership

between him and Devin? Keep watching, we shall see, and I'm glad you

enjoy the story.

Date: 06/13/2009 08:19 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 8: The Awakening of Demons Reviewer: hh5

 

Its great that they found each other. Just hope each others demons don't get in each others way. Hope love gets fostered.

Author's Response: One's demons are helping to awaken the others. Will it destroy Devin or will he finally respond and fight back? We shall see.

Date: 06/12/2009 11:29 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 8: The Awakening of Demons Reviewer: David McLeod

 

The characters, already three-dimensional, are becoming so real

that they nearly step from the page into your room, just as their

emotions move from the page into your heart. One cannot read this story

without aching for Sunny and Devin, and wishing that they will be able

to exorcise their demons.Author's Response: Demons are slumbering lightly, and more are about to awaken. They shall be exorcised and released, and love will be found.

Date: 06/12/2009 06:01 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 7 The Greatest Reviewer: DragonFire

 

Excellent story so far; with so many questions unanswered and

more being asked every chapter. Devin is indeed a mystery and it seems

very adept at mind games and manipulation. Will Sunny be the one to

break down the facade? No clue, but am certainly tuning in again to find

out.

Date: 06/04/2009 05:06 AM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 7 The Greatest Reviewer: acht-acht

 

God, that´s one hell of a story. I just read the 7 chapters and

to say I´m desperate for the next update would be an understatement. I

love all the characters you introduced so far (except coach & the

doctor and they´re gone), and I loved how the boys bonded right away ...

Devin really is a dark horse, but I believe in some sort of positive

outcome for his plans (whatever they are). "He didn’t want to remember

the last time he’d laughed or had so much fun around people." - That

sentence almost broke my heart in ch 6 - I´m so damn intrigued to what

happened to him exactly ...

Clara

(I´d rate you with 10, but I just gave you a 9 to leave a some allowance for future plot twist I might hate ...

Date: 04/08/2009 08:06 AM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: A strange afternoon, Some plans Backfire. Reviewer: hh5

 

Wow big take on the story then followed by another mystery.

Date: 03/10/2009 09:43 PM [Respond]

Edited December 8, 2010 by Linxe Termoil

[Welshdude]

I remember reading this awhile back:) Loved the story and found the chars very interesting. Any future plans with this story?

[Linxe Termoil]

Yes. Unfortunately the story is so complex that I have to be extremely careful with it or I'm going to mess everything up.