I just want to applaud the goat on another well researched and written chapter. While he successfully managed to avoid any cliffs I still think there is a rather steep hill there...
Trevor was shot and although it was not all that deep, if the bullet penetrated the abdominal cavity at all that makes controlling the bleeding very difficult because it can just bleed into his belly even if they bandage the wound on the surface. Let's hope that this bullet only hit the muscle and underlying fascia and did not go any deeper. While he lost a lot of blood the fact that he is young and healthy and still conscious at this point with the bleeding hopefully under control are all very big pluses for him but if he still has some bleeding he'll only be able to compensate for so long.
Shane, however, is on very shaky ground. Lightning strikes can be very, very bad. As was mentioned in the story, lightning can cause all sorts of heart problems (Ventricular fibrillation and asystole being the most common I've learned about). Luckily though, the sinoatrial node is rhythmic and even after a depolarization from a lightning strike can resume its pacemaking duties as long as enough cardiac muscle remains viable after the strike to contract on each impulse. It appears that Shane is very lucky because his heart resumed its automaticity pretty quickly AND his nervous system was still functional to the point he could breath and even respond a little. I'm afraid that's where the good news ends. Due to the amount of electricity that went through his body Shane could have some serious underlying trauma including fractured bones (think neck and spine along with that) and even worse, a lot of damaged tissue.
The damaged tissue can come from burns and also just stressing the muscles too much. All of this leads to cellular break down which releases toxic metabolites, potassium, and in the case of muscle myoglobin into the blood. If his potassium gets too high in his blood his heart will stop and CPR will not bring it back this time. The myoglobin can 'clog' his kidneys and cause acute renal failure (usually a later sign). To help all of this Shane needs medical care and the longer he waits the higher his chances of dying are. He needs at minimum an IV so he can get 1.5 L/hr of fluid and some bicarbonate to help flush all of this out of his body.
While this might not be a cliffhanger there definitely is a deadfall that we should look out for. The only way out of this with Shane surviving (if he sustained that kind of damage) is a rescue inside the eye BEFORE they make landfall.
Also, kudos on the explanation between chest-compression-only CPR and the traditional method. The American Heart Association is pushing chest-compression-only CPR because most cardiac arrests are cardiac events (i.e. it was something wrong with the heart). The rationale behind this is that on inspired air the lungs receive around 21% oxygen. During exhale there is something like 14-16% oxygen (depending on the source you read) left in the air. During a cardiac arrest there is more than enough oxygen in the blood to last several minutes without another breath; it just isn't circulating. Along with that, it takes 5-6 good compressions to resume a coronary perfusion pressure that is life sustainable; each pause in compressions is detrimental to survival. The exceptions to this are anything that could have a respiratory cause because if there is a problem with the respiratory system then there is most likely not enough oxygen in the blood at the time of the cardiac arrest. Children are included in the group of "use regular CPR" because the majority of cardiac arrests in children are respiratory in nature (i.e. they stopped breathing and then the heart stopped).