OMG absolutely LOVE it! (read all 4 chapters)... premise is great, but I think the awesomeness lies in your ability to write and drive the premise forward -- you've got such a flair for descriptive writing, it's so immersive that I was easily hooked. I'm already in love with Tepin, he's so sexy!!! Ugh I wish I hadn't read it, coz now I've got to wait for ages until each chapter comes out. And I hate waiting. I wish I stumbled across it when you were like 30 chapters in, so I don't have to wait long periods. Overall, such an ambitious and creative foray into gay storytelling, I'm so excited to see where this story heads next. So stop whatever the heck you're doing and concentrate on putting out at least 5 chapters each week LOL.
On THAT note... do me a favour? Don't bothering my story, k? I'm embarrassed.