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  1. boys2menstory

    Chapter 1

    OMG absolutely LOVE it! (read all 4 chapters)... premise is great, but I think the awesomeness lies in your ability to write and drive the premise forward -- you've got such a flair for descriptive writing, it's so immersive that I was easily hooked. I'm already in love with Tepin, he's so sexy!!! Ugh I wish I hadn't read it, coz now I've got to wait for ages until each chapter comes out. And I hate waiting. I wish I stumbled across it when you were like 30 chapters in, so I don't have to wait long periods. Overall, such an ambitious and creative foray into gay storytelling, I'm so excited to see where this story heads next. So stop whatever the heck you're doing and concentrate on putting out at least 5 chapters each week LOL. On THAT note... do me a favour? Don't bothering my story, k? I'm embarrassed.
  2. Paul was running deep in the woods. The winds were strong, whipping the tree branches about, almost ripping them apart. He looked above to see raindrops slowly descending to meet the earth, some landing on him. Wiping away the moisture on his face, he looked ahead and kept running. Yet he was unsure of what he was running away from. He suddenly tripped on a tree branch. Raising his arms and closing his eyes, he fell to the ground hard. It didn't hurt. He opened his eyes and saw that
  3. The darkness was a welcomed friend, allowing him to process his bizarre reaction only a moment earlier. The reprieve from Paul's closeness to figure things out, specifically why he seemed to respond in such a... for lack of a better word, 'contrary' manner when he was in Paul's arms, was very much needed. He acknowledged the fact that he bumped his head pretty hard on his steering wheel, and that he lost a bit of blood. There was also a chance that he might have suffered a concussion. But w
  4. A coming of age story where an extraordinary encounter during a storm opens up a whole new world for Liam and Paul.
  5. Heavy raindrops pelted the jeep’s roof with an angry consistency, while the wind howled loudly as Liam guided the jeep down a long and slippery dirt road towards home. A massive storm was due to hit in a few hours, but the current weather blowing outside felt like the storm had already arrived. Liam shuddered as he imagined how bad the weather would further deteriorate once the storm had actually hit. His home wasn’t lucky during the last one, tearing the roof apart and bringing down a nearb
  6. "Paul… I don't know how to say this, so I'm going to just come out and say it." Liam took a deep breath, and looked directly into Paul's eyes. His gaze was unwavering. "I love you. And I want to spend the rest of my life with you. I don't know what we have exactly, and I don't care what people think. I just can't imagine any scenario of my life without you in it, and just the thought of you with someone else drives me insanely crazy… But… I'm willing to let go if you don't feel the same.
  7. Oh God he's hot!
  8. Definitely Kaidan, he's absolutely gorgeous AND I've had him since ME1.
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