SoullessCynner

Please do not fear for me, my friend. I'll be okay in time. I'll never stop missing or loving you, But this grief I feel will eventually lessen. It won't ever go away completely, But I'll be happy again someday. You were my best friend for half my life, So don't fret if I'm sad longer than you'd like. You've been a huge part of my life for so long, I have to learn what my life will be like with you gone. I'm going to cry for you

I love what I've seen so far. Kohen is adorable and I really feel for him. Captain seems to have an attachment to him, and he's protective. I love Lakshou, too. My only complaint is that you've been spelling his name as "Kohen", but in this chapter, you changed it to "Cohen".

You never finished this, Foopy? 😟

I'm with everybody else: More please.

I'm liking this story so far, although I really hope that Hudson doesn't turn out to be evil in the end, like the other caretakers. Perhaps Chris can keep him good and sane?

Poor Teddy, indeed! Wake up, Teddy! I'm sure Will wants to squeeze you to pieces just like a teddy bear! Teddy is definitely awesome. And I love Wildman, too. Like Valkyrie, I really want to know Wildman's story. Can't wait for Wednesday! ~Cyn

Poor Dave. Now I just wanna cuddle him. Shield him from all the big bad meanieheads. Let me at the guy that hurt Dave. Great chapter btw.

I hope Teddy comes out of this stupor soon, and with no ill effects. I'm really loving this story. ~Cyn

Nobody I know drinks coffee. It's a very disgusting drink. Almost as bad beer.

Hey, Cia. I love this story a lot. In fact, this is my second time reading it. In this chapter, I noticed a discrepancy, though. In chapter 4, you say (or rather, Dane's father says,) that Dane turns 18 in February. "....You are in charge of my son's money until he turns 18 next February..." But in this chapter, it's changed to October. "....so that I can make a recommendation to the judge about where you need to be placed until you reach 18, sometime in the fall." Mrs. E looked at her file, "Yes, October, right?" That's all I had to say. Now on to the next wonderful chapter. (I can't believe that when I read this the first time around, I didn't "like" each chapter. )

I really hope you continue this story someday. It's really great so far. I hope Som and Rabbie can stop the Cailleach.

Yay! I was right! I was right! I was right! I suspected about Dillon for the last few chapters now, and I was right! I love being right. And I love mpreg. And I love this story.

It was little jarring when you switched from past tense to present tense. But other than that, this was a good chapter.

Wait, what? Crosswords? We have crossword puzzles on here? Where? O_o