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Day 55 I woke up with a cry. Something is pounding loudly outside the windows. Mark gasped and jolts from his sleep. I don’t know if my eyes are opened or closed. It is total darkness. Howling and pounding outside. The wet, icy bite of the wind spills into the room. I crawled back, feeling Mark’s hands on my arms. Slowly, my eyes adjust and I see outlines in the dark shadows. I can vaguely make out his silhouette. “Calm down.” He says, even though he sounds as breathless as me. I try to say
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Hahaha... They definitely do!
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What can I say? The night isn't over yet
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Interesting theory! We'll see what happens next
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Sweet lil Dan is only 15 and a rookie in love. He'll have lots of growing up to do and so will Mark. All I can say is that it won't be an easy love story
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I'm glad you're starting to like Tristan! Mark is getting way too much limelight
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It seems like you have definitely picked up many of the clues:) Read on to find out!
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Tristan and I are told to wait outside at the waiting area. Few places in the school have lights turned on at night. The Colonel’s office is one of them. The generator runs on fuel and they are harder to find these days. Supply runs are returning with fewer and fewer yields each time. Pretty soon, modern inventions like electricity, ammunition, medicines will run out. Cars, planes and internet will slowly become bedtime stories we tell to ourselves to remind us that it wasn’t a figment our imagi
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Old times, new beginnings.
kevinchn commented on kevinchn's story chapter in Old times, new beginnings.
Thanks for the review, I will try to post regularly -
Old times, new beginnings.
kevinchn commented on kevinchn's story chapter in Old times, new beginnings.
Sometimes, a clear cut rejection is kinder. It's always messy when feelings are murky. The way Mark feels also reflects the changing world. It's only two months into the apocalypse and things will continue to unfold. -
Old times, new beginnings.
kevinchn commented on kevinchn's story chapter in Old times, new beginnings.
thanks! Keep on reading -
Old times, new beginnings.
kevinchn commented on kevinchn's story chapter in Old times, new beginnings.
Nice to see you following this story too! I like my love stories abit offbeat and bumpy, hope you enjoy the ride -
Old times, new beginnings.
kevinchn commented on kevinchn's story chapter in Old times, new beginnings.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! Yes, you are spot on about Mark's feelings towards Daniel at this stage. At this time, the world is changing and Dan is barely 15 (It's not yet 2 months). So things will unfold, norms will change. That issue with Grey hasn't quite resolve yet and it will be revealed pretty soon what the Colonel is really up to. Mark and Jody was assigned to a construction job which is inside the school itself. They are still newcomers (1 week in the fold) and they haven't been asked to go for the more dangerous supply runs yet (As to why, this will be revealed in the next few chapters). -
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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The soldiers drag Grey out by his collar and throw him onto the floor. Glaring flash light shone at him, bruises and cuts visible on his impassive face. He offers no resistance as the soldiers kick him. It’s as if he doesn’t care what happens to him anymore. I’m about to step out from the shadow when Tristan stops me. "Stay out of this." He warns. "But he can’t be guilty. I've been with him the whole night." I said. "None of your business Dan. Don’t get yourself into trouble." I watch as the
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)
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Thank you! I sure will
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I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the reviews and feel free to give any feedback for the story!
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Thanks for the review, cheers!
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I'm glad you enjoy it!
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I'm glad you enjoy it!
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Mark steps in between me and Grey. They glared at each other like two live wires, clenched jaws and bulging veins, both towering over me. Mark gripped my arm till it turned white and numbed. I feel his sweaty palm and thumping pulse. His eyes narrowed and his muscles tensed like a cornered beast. Grey is composed and poised. Short blond hair, clean cut features, a tall masculine frame; he could easily be one of those poster boys for marine's recruitment ads. But there’s something about him tha
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Day 47 The morning sun glared as I stirred in Tristan's arms. My eyes feel raw and swollen as I rubbed; we must have cried ourselves to sleep last night. There are so much to ask and say to my brother, but words simply failed us. Between the hugs and tears, he swore never to call me names again and I apologised for the times I had ratted on him to mom and dad. At that time, I didn't know why we cried over little things like these. All I know is that I have a second chance with him and I can't l
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