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  1. Right, left, left again, down the stairs, straight for two blocks, right, and pause. Nothing, did they give up? No. Footsteps not too far from me. Miller’s alley, it should be safe now. I take one last gulp of air before dashing towards the shadows, careful as to not make too much noise. I grip the bag tighter, dinner for Lin, Fale and me! Better not lose it… Right, left, right again, duck under the pipes, jump over the sleeping guy, straight, and finally left in Miller’s Lane. I slide in the
  2. Welcome to Elathia, a world where humans live on 8 islands that float in the sky. Capital Island is rich and orderly, while Zarch is, well, the exact opposite... A tale of magic and wonder to find oneself.
  3. Max paced impatiently behind his front door. Aaron was coming to pick him up and he was late. Aaron was never late, why was he late? For the millionth time, Max looked at his watch, 2 minutes past 3, Aaron was late by 32 minutes! This was unlike him, and he knew that Max hated being late himself! He finally heard a car pulling up, and he tore the door open. Before he could talk Aaron put his hand up, still half in his car. “Before you get mad at me,” he said before turning towards Max. “Alice
  4. Elizabeth retreated to her room, and left Max and Marie together to talk. She was of course happy to know that Rose had a sister, but she understood that this was important for Max. She had been his only family, and she knew that she had failed him for years. This was Max’s chance to experience something new, and maybe help him grow. She cried silently, happy for her nephew, but sad and worried that she might lose him. At first Max was still overwhelmed by his emotions, they swirled inside him
  5. Christmas had come and past, but it was the first time Max had really celebrated it in years. Once their friends had gone home, he and Aaron had gone in the backyard. There was a bench close to the edge of the garden, it was under the trees and near a small pond, though said pond was frozen over. They had cleared the snow off and had sat down. Even though the cold seeped through their clothes, they had stayed there for quite some time, talking and kissing. Sally had come to get them when lunch
  6. The day dawned clear and sunny, the light reflecting on the white layer of snow. The sun rays went through Max’s window and landed on his cheek, waking him up with their delicate warmth. It was around 9 in the morning. Max’s naked body was snuggled against Aaron’s just as naked body, and Max had his head resting near his boyfriend’s shoulder, as always when they slept together… He was tempted to fall back asleep for a few more minutes, minutes he knew would drag on to hours. He sighed and slowly
  7. It was snowing in the woods outside Max’s window. He wore a red wool sweater that his aunt had gotten him. It had little reindeers, Christmas trees and so on stitched on it, making it the perfect sweater for the holyday season. It was already dark outside, though it was barely 6 PM. What did you expect so close from the solstice? A few moths had passed since the incident under the tree, and the start of Max’s healing. They had gone through so much in so little time, and these months had been a
  8. dianjin

    Golden Heart

    Following the events of book 1: Frozen Heart, this story will follow the same characters as they continue with their lives, make new friends. Couples will form, some will become stronger, others will crumble, and shocking truths will be revealed!
  9. Dear reader, let me start this chapter in the most unusual of ways, let me start this chapter with a question. Have you ever starred at nothing, oblivious to the world around you? Have you ever felt like your mind was completely blank? If yes then you can probably relate to the next paragraph, for you already understand how Max felt in the nurse’s office. For those that don’t, well, read on and keep an ‘open’ mind! Max opened his eyes slowly, he was lying on a rather uncomfortable bed, and a
  10. Hand in hand, Aaron and Max met up with Alice and Mara before the first bell. Max had woken up well rested, relaxed, and happy. All of it felt so new for him, and at times he wondered in amazement if it was really real. Just a few weeks ago he had been Ghost, a gloomy and shy kid, who never talked, never dreamed, never loved, and never hated. He had been a puppet of his dormant mind. Then Aaron had come, his exact opposite, and somehow they had balanced each other out. Max wasn’t Maximilian anym
  11. “God Max this is so good!” Aaron was getting himself another full plate, his third to be exact. “I’m glad you like it babe.” Max took the compliment to the heart. It really meant a lot for him that Aaron liked his cooking, as it was one of the only things in the world that he could do correctly. The three of them were dinning at the kitchen table, and, although they didn’t say much, Max felt at peace, he had his family around him. Before eating he had for the first time in his life started to
  12. “Max is that you?” came a voice from the living room. Max threw his bag down the hall, and tore his feet from his shoes. He ran towards the arch on his left that led to said living room. His feet slipped on the wood floor, and he barely caught himself. Damn socks would be the end of him! Lying in the couch, his aunt looked pale and very tired, but alive! He skidded to a stop in front of her. “Are you alright?” he asked, his voice thick with concern. “Tired, but the doctor said I should be fin
  13. Snowflakes feel around Maximilian from the pure white clouds above him. All around him was immaculate and silent, and nothing moved, all was motionless. He had his head thrown back, eyes closed, and the icy crystals lightly stung on his face. He liked this feeling, a slight chill on a single nerve at a time. Maximilian stood there, as still as the valley around him. Alone, he was alone, and for some reason he was bothered by it, he felt like something was missing. He was about to remember what
  14. Thanks Lisa! I think the during my break I will re-read my whole story and correct anything I see The article on dialog punctuation was really helpful thanks!
  15. Not wanting to disturb them, Max stood in the dining room silently. Aaron was obviously upset about something, and although he should have rushed to see what was wrong he understood that if Aaron hadn't talked to him about it then it meant he wasn't ready to. Hell Max hadn't on his side either, and he didn't even know if one day he would! He respected their intimacy, but out of curiosity he listened. So what if listening at doors was a very bad habit! "Honey, listen to me, I know that this is h
  16. "Before you ask, your aunt is out of harms way." Dr. Howen had come to get them in the waiting room then had guided them to his office. He looked very tired, and had very deep pockets beneath his eyes. His office was clean and orderly, and there were enough chairs for the three of them. Max sat between his friend and his boyfriend, and he held Aaron's hand very tightly. Inside his chest, his heart was beating fast, and his hands were probably sweaty. "What happened doctor," he asked in a voice
  17. Thanks for the advice, and God I hope I don't have that many typo errors
  18. Five long minutes later, Aaron's car skidded to a stop in front of Max. Aaron wasn't even out of his car yet that a pair of desperate arms clung to him tightly. He could feel every sob that shook the smaller body that was pressed against his. "I'm here, it's OK," Aaron stroked the soft black curls on top of Max's head, and he tried his best to soothe him. "What's wrong babe, talk to me." "It's-it's my aunt, she-she's off to the hospital." "What happened?" "After you left she came in the kitc
  19. Max woke up to the sun warming his cheek gently, well not just his cheek, his back, and his ass-cheeks, and his legs, and well all of his back side. He had fallen asleep naked on Aaron the night before, and he was amazed that they hadn't moved at all during in their sleep. He was about to shift when he realized how MUCH or should I say how LITTLE they had moved: Aaron's limp cock was still in his hole. He also felt sticky in that region, even though Aaron was still sound asleep he blushed at the
  20. They wandered around a bit in the mall, it was still the middle of the afternoon and none of them were due before dinner time. They fooled around in an electronics store with some of the gadgets, they had a blast with some of the toys from a toy store. For Max it was like being the kid he never had been, he got the chance to hold toys in his hands and have fun with them. Aaron even convinced him to build a bear with him at Build a Bear Workshop (well duh), it was silly and even for the vendor it
  21. Alice's burrito was much better, not as spicy that is! Max really enjoyed it, he was almost sad when he finished it. Even though he had eaten so much he still had room for AT LEAST half a burrito. They continued chatting at their table for a few minutes, well actually Alice and Aaron were the ones that talked, Max just sipped his drink, admiring his boyfriend's beauty. Hair that looked like pure gold strands, and eyes that one could mistake for chocolate. His face was well proportioned, no zit,
  22. Both their bodies were still glued to the other's, though they were on Max's bed now, when Elizabeth knocked on the door to Max's room/library. "Come on boys hurry up! We have a lot to do!" she called cheerfully. "In a minute!" managed Max, escaping Aaron's lips for a second before plunging back into their immediate passion. Aaron was caressing his body lovingly, and under his fingers his skin tingled. Soon he felt something he never had in his lower zone. He was rock hard, had been for a few
  23. That morning, Max felt quite lonely getting ready for school. He signed at the thought of seeing Aaron only when he got to school. God how great it would be if you could fast forward these little boring moments! More Aaron for Max! Max sighed again, he was so desperately in love with Aaron. So madly in love, and he loved every second of it. "I love him, and I love to love him," he giggled at his twisted thought. He was happily chewing on his piece of bread when he got a text on his phone. That
  24. Max spent a wonderful night! Both he and Aaron had spent it together in Max's bed, and the best part was that they were both in nothing but their underwear! Max had the hardest erection ever when they first got in bed. He tried to hide it as best he could, but he was sure Aaron had noticed. Mostly due to the fact that Aaron had giggled and had pulled him even closer, all while caressing Max's smooth legs. After his dick had gone back to a more relaxed state, Max fell asleep fast. He felt so safe
  25. "How did I become so weak? What reason pushed me to lower my defenses?" Maximilian thought as he ran to his shelter: the library, tears of anger and frustration blinding him.. His emotions were all over the place, trying to escape his terrible wrath. He finally caught them all and shoved them deeper than they ever had been. Then he willed a wall of ice to surround them, imprisoning them forever. This time he showed to mercy, the wall was as high as the sky, and as thick as ten walls of Troy. No
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