This story had the most magical effect on me... I can't even explain what it is, but it's very very powerful. I guess I really experienced the emotions the characters were going through. I had to stop at times and collect my thoughts from time to time, to let it take over my feelings. I really would love to know your inspiration for this story if there is one To me it felt like a beautiful dream. A dream I really didn't want to wake upfrom. I actually had tears in my eyes sometimes I guess after all i kind of didnt want the story to end lol Which is rare you really touched my heart with your words in this story. The most amazing thig is how you took a very different angle on Runes magical ability of being invisible ( by the way I think ur title for this story is very catchy !!! and there is something raw and honest about ur writing that I absolutly love ) I mean Rune had the ability to become visible and invisible at will. I mean it could be a gift right ? Lol (maybe I'm thinking like this because I just finished reading " Hero " by Perry Moore a gay super hero novel, just before reading ur story). And it was not like he was a ghost. He was tactile and people could hear him and see him if he wanted them to see him. And also he had the ability to make things invisible for how ever long he wanted ( I mean it could be considered a gift right ??)
But I guess what I'm trying to get at is that you captured a very different emotion that was so powerful and turned it to a wonderful storyline. I guess there are many people in the world that are even thought not invisible, yet feel the same wAy as Rune felt. That no one can see u or hear u. U just seem to exist. And I guess I have felt that feeling before. But man you captured that so well. It was sad happy and beautiful at the same time I'm lucky to have stumbled on ur story : D xoxoxox
PS : I actually got a friend ( s student of mine while I was a don at university ) named Rune who was an amazing photographer. Just thought that was a nice surprise :
Dinuka ( Aka= tizysam)
