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  1. eric5748

    Chapter 1

    Very nice, and glad to see that you're still writing for us.
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    Chapter 33

    I'm just happy to hear an update of any sort, and to know that at least something is coming, hopefully sooner, rather than later.
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    Chapter 33

    Well Kyle, as per usual, you went and exceeded my expectations. Honestly Dude, your 1 chapter was damn near as long as my longest total story, yet, when it ended, I was like FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK, it's done. Oh my god, the detail, the emotion, the action. Boy am I ever glad that you didn't make us read through Kandric shaming himself by having sex with that female, honestly didn't see that coming, just hope you don't intend to write about that, LOL, I'd still read it anyway. You do truly amaze me, your skill at writing is second to nearly none, and though I found many small mistakes in the editing, considering the sheer volume that you wrote, it was shockingly light, though I more than likely missed lots as well just because I was too interested in reading, the story line simply made me forget to edit like I've trained myself to do for my own work. There were only 2 areas that come to mind that I had to go back and re-read to try and figure out what you were trying to say, which considering all that you wrote, once again is amazing. I thought about how I would try and resolve them to see how I would make them clearer and more easily understood, and I'm not sure I could either, so, everyone else might just have to pause to think about them as well. I'm sure on my next read through, I'll catch a few more, but that's perfectly okay. It truly is no wonder it took so long for this chapter to come out, just the writing alone must have been time consuming, but then the editing on top of that had to have been damn near as long. So, when can we expect the next chapter. Tomorrow we all hope. I know, impossible, yet the wait, as always, will simply be too long, but you know I'll be there to read it happily when that glorious day comes. Thanks again Kyle.
  4. Yeah, that sucks, and not nearly as well as a good gay guy would, right, wink wink. I personally do hope that you finish it, but I do know about the not wanting to spend more time at the computer than you already do, I've been feeling a bit like that myself lately, hence my not doing any writing lately. As always, should you need any help with anything, just let me know.
  5. Hi Myr, I just finished reading all your stories, once again, I do so at least once a year. It's been so long though since not only I've commented, but since you've posted to HP POD. Please finish it, I know I am not the only one who would like to see it finished.. I know that you are busy, so I don't expect it immediately, but would tomorrow be too soon. LOL, sorry, that was mean. I know what it's like though, I've been so busy as of late that I haven't had the desire to even write, even though that's absolutely my biggest stress relief, but because I've been so busy, I'm tired, which kills my creativity, so I do understand. Hope all is well otherwise, and that you are coping with this hell year as best you can. As always, thanks for your writing, and hope to see more soon.
  6. eric5748

    Chapter 14

    So, any chance we can get an update on this story as well. Just posted to Kandric as well, same offer as there. We can't wait for more.
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    Chapter 32

    Kyle, please, we all beg of you. It has been nearly two and a half years, can we get another chapter soon. I know and understand how difficult and time consuming it must be to write, but I for one just have to see how it ends, though no, I don't want it to end too soon either. As always, the offer to edit for you is always there, as it always has been, or any help that I can offer, you have but to ask, I trust you still have my email address. Keep up the great work though, you have many adoring fans who cannot wait for more.
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    Chapter 3

    Really. I've never heard that before. Nearly every one of my family who had babies were released from the hospital, sometimes as early as 6 hours later, if not, it was the next morning. In fact, if I'm not mistaken, one of the nurses encouraged the family to get baby around as many people as possible, and we've pretty much always gone and visited almost as soon as baby was home. From the way I understand it, it's better to get the baby around all that, instead of hiding them away, since they're still gonna get it anyway. Not sure, I'm not a doctor and don't pretend to understand any of that, so, I think it depends on who you ask.
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    Chapter 32

    Imagine trying to write it and actually manage to keep track of it all, it's small wonder it's taking so long. Not sure how Kyle has managed to do it, to tell you the truth, I can barely keep track of 5 or 6 characters and get everything correct. Yes, it can get a bit confusing, but, the great thing is, that just means you have to go back and read it again. I think I have read it from start to finish now 6 or maybe even 7 times, though I have not done so again since before the previous chapter, so it is coming up on time of doing so once more.
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    Chapter 32

    Holy shit, Kyle, totally worth the wait, though, as always, I so totally want the next chapter tomorrow, so please get right on that will you. My god, though, I've seen full sized books that were made into movies that were shorter, and yet I cannot wait to go back and read it again, and as soon as I get back from vacation, I plan to do just that, for I am certain that I have missed things in my need to read it. Keep up the good work. As always, thanks.
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    Chapter 14

    2 chapters in 2 days, amazing, thanks.
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    Chapter 13

    Wait, Kyle has a website, and he posts his stories there, why wasm't I told. What is it please.
  13. eric5748

    Chapter 13

    Wow, finally another chapter, after all these years, I thought it was forgotten about. Thanks.
  14. eric5748

    Chapter 1

    LOL, my thoughts exactly.
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    Chapter 14

    Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
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    Chapter 11

    Thanks, I always prefer to read a story of content, not just raw sex, hence that is what I write as well.
  17. eric5748

    Chapter 29

    As always Kyle, incredible. I am going to back and re-read the chapter again, and then the entire story.
  18. Yeah, it's too bad that Kyle has not added anything further in such a long time. I tried to email him a while back with the only email address I had, and I never received a response. I have to wonder if something happened, and if not, then when will another chapter be added. I know him and Myr used to know each other, so if something happened, I would think Myr would have heard about it. Then again, have not heard much of Myr lately either. Either way, would love to see another chapter soon, or even better yet, the rest of the story.
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    Chapter 28

    I agree with all those before me, YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Thanks Kyle, once again a stellar chapter and hope to see more soon. About how much is left to go you figure, and of course, more importantly, how long 'til the next chapter.
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    Chapter 27

    Crap, you've gone and left me hanging again, and now you're probably gonna make me wait another year aren't you. I want to see Kandric and his grandfather duke it out myself, same is it sounds Myr does. Please oh please, don't make me wait another year, or more, that would be torture.
  21. eric5748

    Chapter 1

    Glad that you are enjoying the story
  22. eric5748

    Chapter 12

    Couldn't agree more, and as always, can't wait to see more.
  23. Young cousins find out that they have a lot more in common than they thought.
  24. ****This story involves love and sex between two young boy cousins. It also involves diaper wearing, as do all my stories. If any of this is not what you are after, then please leave now. This is a short and complete tale, and I hope that you enjoy it. If you have any comments, I would love to hear from you, so please email me at erich5748@ymail.com. Thanks for taking the time to read.**** “But Mom, I don't wanna watch him, he's weird.” Twelve year old James whined. “He's your cousin, a
  25. The title pretty much says it all. A young horny boy has all he can take and has a little fun with his friend while he sleeps. Well, it flows from there and two friends find love.
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