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  1. Roland

    Chapter 20

    “Go,” Garnet said to Aegir as he shook his head to clear it. “Go back with your friends. I am okay.” Aegir still looked unsure, but Garnet proved it by getting back to his feet, hefting his gigantic War Hammer. Aegir had just started to turn when Garnet spoke again. “Hold,” he said. Looking around at the battle, he saw only the two warrior dragons left. Until this point, they had been so focused on the wall's magic that they had never gotten into the fight. After the death of the True,
  2. Roland

    Chapter 19

    Don't forget the Red Warrior that Mablin, Gradon, and Darren killed. lol. They won't forget about him any time soon
  3. Roland

    Chapter 19

    Being a Mundane, she stayed with the Caravan outside. WAIT! Great Red. Who said anything about a GREAT RED?!?!?! Come on really? they're ONLY Warrior Dragons after all! Yes... I think the True Red would agree with you.
  4. Roland

    Chapter 19

    Wow, I gotta say I am blown away by the comments. This was a difficult chapter to write, obviously, and it would never have been completed without my editors and beta readers. Thank you to everyone for your kind comments. There are a few questions that need answering, but I will have to do that tomorrow as I have already medicated for the evening, so my normally scattered brain is even worse. OH WAIT!!! SQUIRREL!!!
  5. Roland

    Chapter 19

    The ambush was sudden and overwhelming as the two walked along the snow-covered forested country road. “FALL BACK!” Ivran called out as he blocked yet another blow and was rewarded with a hammer blow to his left hip. Thankfully, his Alphar armor was good and holding. “To where?” Sudryl questioned as his back met Ivran’s. “We are surrounded!” Sudryl’s blade flashed, and the orc attacking him fell, its head cleaved in two. Two more took its place, and before long, Sudryl fell from a hammer bl
  6. Roland

    Chapter 18

    oh... So not only do I have to put up with you nitpicking in the chapters, but now you are 'editing' my posts? There really is no pleasing you! I think it should be said than that thier really is no neewd fer me ta needs editin. I's mean weally! the narve of sem peps!!
  7. Roland

    Chapter 18

    Nothing much... just fire
  8. Roland

    Chapter 18

    You can thank one of my editors for that little gem. and like you i was glad i wasn't drinking anything when he suggested it
  9. Roland

    Chapter 18

    What a shock, Rovnar shows up, and up ends EVERYTHING! Entirely too much fun was had when Rovnar was being written. Now we shall see what the future brings.
  10. Roland

    Chapter 18

    The predawn twilight found everyone gathered around the fire circle in small groups, enjoying their Dagger Boar breakfast. Mablin grunted as he sat down at the fire pit. He had filled his plate with Dagger Boar and the vegetables that had been added. He actually wished his caravan were here since he had bread in his wagon, but he would make do. As soon as he sat, Sigvat came over to him with a mug full of a fruit juice blend that the Seandrians enjoyed. He nodded to the boy as he took the offere
  11. Roland

    Chapter 17

    Previously: “By the gods, Garnet!” Xavier replied, as he began casting auto-cleanse spells on everybody. “It is just a story! No need to make a Royal Ass of yourself.” “Yes, but…” “Um, Mentor?” “What, Aegir” “It is not just a story. It is a true adventure from just at the end of the Dragon Wars.” “WHAT!!!” yelled both Garnet and Xavier at the same time. “That’s what I said too…” grumbled Malachi. “It’s history. But would they listen to me? Nooo.” Ch
  12. Roland

    Chapter 3

    I'll be honest. When Al asked me to read what he was working on, I didn't think I would like it. Frankly, I like action, big fights, lots and lots of action and things like that. Al told me that it was a coming-of-age story that wouldn't have lots of the action I liked. Well, we were both wrong. I can not comment much on each chapter since I know what is to come, but what I can comment on is how good of a story it is. After only 3 chapters, you have hardly got your feet wet. I will very much enjoy the reactions that come after each chapter.
  13. Roland

    Chapter 2

    Oh... you COULD answer them; you just choose not to. However, I am not above being bribed to answer people's questions since I did beta read this for you. So, what shall i start the bidding out at?
  14. Roland

    Chapter 16

    Correct, in chapter 30, Vondum commands Cam’ris to go to the Blues for education. “Excellent!” Vondum’s voice boomed with a degree of praise, “Now let me go see what could be so important as to drag me off the front lines! Cam’ris, you are now with me at all times unless doing something I order, and as of right now, I want you to take Blue Streak over to the largest of the Blue Dragons over by the main campfire and see what he knows of Shocker Lizard Dragon speech. I also demand you request of him to take you on your first training flight and start working with you on speaking Dragon tongue. For any squire of mine will need to know how to ride on the back of, and speak to, Dragons.” Then, in chapter 31, shortly after Kandric killed the White Prince: From where Ornam had all but buried his head in the snow, he gasped out with a roar of agony, “Kandric has killed Prince Weraweld! The Great White died looking helpless at him! The last sights were of a smirk and red hair!” As Mathard ran out of the tent to look at the retreating ball of pure white energy, Vondum shook his head, “Unless I miss my guess, good Duke, my Wilderness Scout is there, directly over those bluffs off the far side of the lake.” “So it seems. I need any Dragons who can take someone and all the Griffin riders up with their mounts! We need to get over there… like an hour ago!” Ornam poked his head up from the snow, puking as he did so. “Vondum… I… I need a moment…” “Can you take Cam’ris and Conth when you recover enough?” “I will find a way… Even if I have to take the lizard and the wolf in my claws and land a few times, I will get them there… The Silvers… they have wings meant for cold… take one of them… Go… I will catch up.” Vondum moved up to one of the Silver Warrior Dragons, “You! You look to be recovering from the Dragon death quickly. Can you fly and if so, have you had a rider?” “Yes to both, General.” The Dragon lowered itself. “Hop on, but keep in mind I am not a Black. The front edge of my wings are a great deal more fluid and the scales along the leading edge shift as I fly. They are quite capable of cutting skin…” “Understood, I will keep forward of them. Do you have a preference on foot placement and where I hold your back ridge?” “The longer spines are better for holding onto, since, like my wings and other lead surfaces, they all naturally shift in flight. Boots right under my larger neck guard scales is a nice feeling for me while giving you a better grip. This snow and wind will be nasty. I recommend you keep your head down.” “In boot placement, you and Ornam are similar, and believe me, I have every intention of letting you look forward while I spend most of my time looking back to keep your flank well watched.” Before more could be said the Silver Warrior flapped its wings hard and jumped, taking it nearly straight up. This forced Vondum to hold on and adjust since he was expecting a slow lift with a hard-forward running movement. “Good information, thank you San’i-sar.” Vondum took a few seconds to look around. He quickly noted three other Silver Warriors, only one with a rider flying a pattern, but making sure San’i-sar was in the lead. Below, he could scarcely make out scores of Griffins in formation. Well behind and further down, the shapes of other Dragons could barely be made out in the blowing snow, even though some of them had riders with light sources. He frowned, “San’i-sar, we are moving way faster than the others. We need to keep a more disciplined formation.” So while it is not spoken of often, yet, all the Dragon Races have riders. Just some more than others.
  15. Roland

    Chapter 16

    ehhhh... but it all depends on WHO knows. if it became common knowledge, then there are issues, but then again, who knows what the future could hold.
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