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I'd like to say we don't deserve you - ah, but who am I kidding, we totally deserve you - I mean, what else would I do with the time I spend stalking my "favorites" page to see if you update?

Yeah, I'm so glad Ryan's finally coming around. (Reminds me of the song COMING AROUND - Brie Larson, of course they have little to do with each other, shes talking about herself, i'm talking about him....anyways) And I agree with whoever said it before (is obviously to lazy to check), but Jake does have some IT's ALL ABOUT ME-itis (or whatever it was xD). But anyways, I really loved the chapter, as you can tell by my "review" which was basically a rambling version of "it was great". God I sound 12 sometimes (FYI, I'm NOT 12 ;] ) Anyways, (I say anyways way to much in casual conversation), I was just wondering (and someone may have asked this before, I'm to lazy to check (im pretty lazy as you can tell)), do you plan out your whole stories or do you just write? OK, I'm done for now (SHUT UP KAI - i'm yelling to myself), Kai

Gosh, chapter 9 and i'm finally writing on this board.... Anywho, I love the idea that Ryan isn't that accepting right off the bat, because not everybody is - in my school, i know just who would be accepting, and who wouldn't, so that made coming out to my friends a lot easyer. (BTW my mom figured it out before i told her, and she was like ok, but keep ur options open. awkward talk.) I like the tention, but for some reason (call me insane), i kept thinking that Ryan was going to profess his love to Jake. I don't know why - the punching at Shane...possibly. It's probably just my mind. Also, Shane get's me everytime because his moods seem to change. One minute HAPPY! next minute ANGSTY, and then from MAD to SAD, sometimes (seemingly) all in the same chapter. BUt that's ok, because my favorite of his emotions is his TEEHEE emotion....that's what i call it at least, cause u kno, he and Jake are totally a thing now - despite Jake's I'M NOT GAY persona. Anyways, I loved it. a lot. and you should update it. a lot / soon. kai p.s. this comment/post seems very sketchy...and wierd. so if it seems weird to you, it's a tireing morning for me, so forgive me... p.p.s. did my ps even make sence either? whatever.