Hi!!
I just wanted to leave a comment here for his story!
I was a bit scared at the begining.
I though it was going to go the other way with Steve and Chris...scary:S
I love it, its like out of the frying pan into the fire. Everything that could go wrong does and then some.(It reminds me of the Dominos effect..just one thing after the other)
I'm very happy I'm a single child(well kinda)in some parts.
I'm also wondering about onion soup mix into the meat, does that taste good?
I'm at the edge of my seat on each chapter...and I nearly had a stroke in chapter 37....
I was not very happy with your antihero....Still this was brilliant!