Jump to content
  • Join Gay Authors

    Join us for free and follow your favorite authors and stories.

    Freddyness
  • Author
  • 251 Words
  • 665 Views
  • 4 Comments
Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 

The WALL - 1. Is there something wrong with me?

 

Hey you over there,

Yes you with the middle aged stare,

Is there something wrong with me?

I look around jealous at what i see,

I think just maybe there’s something wrong with me.

 

Why do I look in the mirror,

And think Your nothing,

i hate you why do you dither,

your nothing when I think this,

I cry I cry because I will never ever get of this emotional seesaw!

 

The must be something wrong with me,

Can't you see how much I bleed,

No one did this for it was none other than me,

I here the word the jabs and cries,

You all tell me ugly lies,

About how I should just go die,

 

So here I am just asking you to be true,

I'm asking is there something wrong with me?

no, I'm asking is there something wrong with you?

Surely not saying it was me! that all you pain was caused by thee.

 

I understand now that when I cry,

I was not you It was I,

I stand up tall above the clouds,

just because you were so fucking proud,

 

You knew I wouldn't self pity,

I took my self down under for you're my cause,

of my loneliness and notoriety,

Because of you I undertook my last applause.

 

The shock was vial,

peaceful at last sleeping softly,

I bet my parents are still in denial,

as to why I took my own life numbly.

Copyright © 2011 Freddyness; All Rights Reserved.
  • Like 1
Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
You are not currently following this story. Be sure to follow to keep up to date with new chapters.

Recommended Comments

Chapter Comments

This has a very strong sound to it. Like the beat in a song lyric. Or rap? The voice is strong and angry and defiant. You are very observant, I think, because this is about what you see as much as what you feel. The truly sad part is suicide never answers the question you ask. Is there something wrong with me? Much more likely to find answers living and writing poety like this one.

On 03/30/2011 04:15 PM, Foster said:
This has a very strong sound to it. Like the beat in a song lyric. Or rap? The voice is strong and angry and defiant. You are very observant, I think, because this is about what you see as much as what you feel. The truly sad part is suicide never answers the question you ask. Is there something wrong with me? Much more likely to find answers living and writing poety like this one.
I know that so I write poems to stop myself haveing pointless revenge as manda put it
View Guidelines

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now


  • Newsletter

    Sign Up and get an occasional Newsletter.  Fill out your profile with favorite genres and say yes to genre news to get the monthly update for your favorite genres.

    Sign Up
×
×
  • Create New...