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    Lugh
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Spinning - 1. Spinning


Short Stories

 

spinning in a whirlpool

of my own making

excreatment, viscara,

fluids a-flowing

hardwood floor

covered in gore


Copyright © 2010 Lugh; All Rights Reserved.
Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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What a difference it makes to read stories wide awake and half asleep. I read *mascara* and it gave the story totally different meaning than you meant with viscara. Wows, more words in this rev than in your poem :D

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On 03/15/2011 11:12 AM, Marzipan said:
What a difference it makes to read stories wide awake and half asleep. I read *mascara* and it gave the story totally different meaning than you meant with viscara. Wows, more words in this rev than in your poem :D
LOL!

 

yeah I think there is a major difference between Viscara and Mascara. Sometimes just a few words can have a huge impact, the trick is finding the right words.

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