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Pretend You're Someone Else - 2. (Chapter Three)-Who Is This Cute Boy?

Peter meets the new boy in school.

Part One

Chapter Three

August--1971

Avoy, Georgia

"Who is this Cute Boy in my English Class?"

Fourteen-year-old Peter Anderson sat in the front row of his Advanced English class, dreading the essay he was about to read aloud. A quick glance at his watch told him that in thirty minutes class would officially be over, but that still gave him plenty of time for his turn.

After tapping the eraser of his pencil on the desk, Peter brought it up to his lips, chewed it a bit, and turned to admire the teeth marks. He would rather be eating his school supplies than listening to Elmer Dell read his essay aloud.

For the past five minutes Elmer had kept the class entertained with tall tales about his father's pig farm. He certainly had an active imagination, which was why he belonged in this class.

Peter knew the reason why all of his classes were honors--his dad happened to be the richest man in town. He didn't consider himself smart. He hardly ever did his homework, and when he did, he never completed it. As soon as the bell rang, Peter always raced home where he either passed the long hours reading or watching his favorite variety shows.

Up until Monday he never really knew his family history. His father happened to be ashamed of his poor past, so he kept his childhood memories to himself. When the time came for Peter to interview him for the assignment, his dad heaved a great sigh and spouted off about fishermen, drunks and prostitutes. Peter didn't know for sure if everything checked out, but at least he had learned something. He worked the next three days carefully polishing the essay and adding some tall tales of his own. He hoped his father would never come across the paper and read it.

As Elmer began wrapping up his speech on the importance of agriculture in his family, Peter nervously swept over his essay. He was certain Ms. Carol wouldn't like what he would be talking about. She seemed the sensitive type. There was no doubt in Peter's mind that he would be scaring her. Perhaps she would faint? That would be funny.

"Thank you, Elmer, your story deserves an A" Ms. Carol's soft voice filled the room.

Elmer actually took a bow when the class applauded him. Peter half-heartedly clapped his hands. He could already feel butterflies in his stomach and they proceeded to worsen when his name was called.

"Last on my list is Peter Anderson. I know your family has been around this small town for several decades. I'm sure they have a colorful history."

Everyone turned to stare. Peter slowly stood up from his desk, gathered his papers and walked with his head down to the front of the room. Facing his audience, he could see rows of eager and amused kids staring back. Taking a deep breath, he cleared his throat, and began:

In August of nineteen-sixty-two, my father, Erich Anderson successfully became the richest man in Avoy, Georgia. Before this happened he lived in a small, one-bedroom house. It seemed like overnight, Dad announced that he was moving us into one of the only two mansions in town.

Before Dad opened his real estate company and became extremely wealthy, there were two types of people in Avoy: poor, and dirt poor. Erich Anderson and his parents (my grandparents) resided on the dirt-poor side.

Growing up during 'The Great Depression,' while living in a one-room shack, Dad knew at an early age that he wanted something more. His own father, Collin Anderson, came to this country from Ireland in the earliest part of the twentieth century. After his move to New Orleans he met his wife, Stella, who just happened to be an illegal German immigrant. Collin had traveled to this wonderful city to pursue a career as a fisherman. He failed miserably and ended up spending most of his time in the local bars. After several days, drinking, fighting, stealing and gambling became more important to my grandfather than his dream.

One night he found himself in the wrong place at the wrong time. While passing by a tavern around three in the morning, he was violently tackled to the ground by his former employer. The job only lasted long enough for Collin to steal five dollars from the man's pocket and run off. Once the man saw the thief stumbling drunk on the pier, he raced over, and taking a knife from his pocket, the old sea captain cut the side of his former employee's face while cussing, and constantly repeating, "Goddamn son-of-a-bitch stole my money!"

Left to die on the rat infested streets of New Orleans, he was miraculously taken to the local hospital by a passing prostitute who found him lying on the ground in a puddle of blood. My grandmother was no ordinary mistress; she was quite strong from her teenage years working the bars in her home country of Germany. Grandfather was quite impressed by her strength, as she managed to haul him off the street and half-drag him to the doctor. Feeling very delirious, he asked her name, to which she replied Sophie. Because of so much blood loss, he thought he heard the name, Stella. The name stuck.

While the doctor patched Collin up, with several crudely sewn stitches and a swig of brandy from Stella, they both came to the decision to leave New Orleans.

Leaving the doctor's office several hours later, they quickly stole the morning newspaper, and browsed the articles for a possible new town in which to live. Flipping through the pages they finally found, to their delight, a very appealing article. "Local Avoy, Georgia man is run over by train in freak accident," Collin read aloud, his voice giddy with excitement. Stella hoped he was delighted by the town and not the tragedy.

The next morning after spending the night sleeping under the docks, the two of them started their day by pick-pocketing five dollars, which they used to purchase train tickets to Atlanta. On New Years' Day, nineteen-thirty-five, they arrived in Georgia and immediately stole a trunk from the platform, and to their astonishment found fifty dollars hidden inside-just enough for a nice hotel room in the city and first class tickets to Avoy. To celebrate their "wealth," the couple decided to marry at a local Justice of the Peace. When they arrived at his home on Peach Street, the old man was so drunk from celebrating the New Year that he didn't even notice the newlyweds stealing twenty dollars from his drawer.

Feeling ecstatic, Collin and Stella returned to their hotel room and conceived their only child. At that moment, the two of them honestly believed that their lives would run smoothly forever. They were wrong.

Two days later, they finally made it to Avoy, expecting heaven on earth, with rich land as far as the eye could see. Dreams of becoming a successful farmer filled my grandfather's head; instead he was horrified to find dirt-poor farmers and not a single bit of green anywhere. Even the grass looked and felt like straw.

With nowhere else to turn, they used their remaining money to purchase a shack and a week's supply of food. The next day, after Stella used a rusty knife to cut away her husband's stitches, Collin went out, and found work as a logger. He was lucky because he happened to be replacing a man who recently died from a blow caused by a fallen tree. The pay consisted of seventy-five cents an hour, but he gladly took it. The Depression raged on, and Stella's morning sickness pointed that a baby might be on the way.

In winter of that year, their first and only child was born-a boy. According to my family, Grandfather always felt guilty for changing his wife's German name, so he decided to give his son the name Erich, spelling it in the original German style.

As the years rolled by, the world might have changed some, but Avoy stayed the same. It was frozen in the thirties. Growing up in this town, my dad knew that someday he wanted to be extremely wealthy. He demanded a change from the life he was living.

During his childhood, the days were spent up in the mountains. From the time he was ten years old, every day began with helping his father chop down trees and haul them off. By the time his fifteenth birthday rolled around, Dad decided to run off to college. He was the smartest student in school. He also knew that any college in the state would accept him because of his outstanding grades. There were two major universities nearby: Emory and The University of Georgia. Erich chose Emory because Athens happened to be a country town.

Dad left Avoy in fifty-three, with enough scholarships, loans and grants to move into the men's dorm. Big plans of returning home a successful businessman filled his head, so he took classes in finance and real estate. Memories of his childhood days spent with my grandfather in the logging industry were always on his mind. It angered him that his dad's boss worked the employees to death and paid them nothing. Erich wanted to change all that.

Two years quickly passed, and eventually the woman that he would end up marrying came into his life. Her name was Lilly and she was from a local Cherokee Indian tribe. Dad and mom first laid eyes on each other during a sorority party, after Erich had been abandoned by his friends. As the hours came and went, he began feeling miserable. After knocking back several drinks, it finally dawned on him that he was not wanted; his clothes and posture spelled out, 'poor hillbilly.' He couldn't wait until the day when he would make his fortune in real estate. After finishing his last glass of brandy, Erich grabbed his jacket from the hall closet, and proceeded to head out the front door. That's when he saw her in the driveway-a beautiful raven-haired angel in pink taffeta.

A burning desire to be with her filled his brain and body. Without thinking about his appearance, Dad ran full speed across the lawn to her car. He could see by the startled fawn look in her eyes that she was surprised. After bumbling his words (he was quite drunk after all), Erich somehow talked the young woman into leaving the party with him. Turns out she was arriving solo; her blind date had stood her up.

Apologizing for this unknown boy's rude behavior, Erich took Lilly to a local Malt Shop; fifteen-cent hamburger, and ten-cent drinks were the only thing he could afford. Several hours later, they were dating. As the weeks went by, their routine consisted of new releases at the Atlanta Theater and Friday nights spent roller-skating. A year later my parents married.

After graduating in the spring of fifty-six, they returned to Avoy. Like most naive college graduates Dad believed he would immediately change the world. Once they made it back to town, the two of them purchased a small house on a loan from Lilly's father. Avoy did have a few homes on the west side of town-small Victorians, and bungalows that were built for the shop-owners during the twenties. The east side of Avoy held nothing but tin-shacks and mountain cabins. Dad would shudder when he talked about the dirt floor home that he once lived in. His mother now took up board in one of the Victorians, living off welfare. Grandfather had passed away the following year the same way many loggers did, a quick and sudden blow to the head.

Unlike his father, Dad wanted to become a successful businessman. A burning desire filled him; he needed to own this town, as revenge for the horrible way it treated his parents. Hatred and rage filled his body as flashbacks of working beside his father returned to him. To work almost twelve hours a day for thirty years, and what was there to show for it? A dirt floor shack, and nothing to eat for days. Dad made a vow that he was going to climb out of poverty. Never again would he or his family be poor.

The first step in the plan was to take out a loan of one-thousand dollars to purchase a rundown home. Dressing in an old business suit that belonged to his father-in-law, Erich made his way over to the nearest bank. He knew that no loan officer had ever approved anything for his family, but seeing how he now possessed a Bachelor's Degree in business, he was willing to give it a try.

An hour later he walked out of the First Bank of Avoy a thousand dollars richer. He didn't know if it was fate or divine being but he had been approved. To celebrate, Dad stopped right in the middle of the sidewalk, threw his hands in the air, and twirled around in circles.

A week later he bought his first house, and a plot of land. By the time a worker-crew transported the old, two-bedroom cabin from the outskirts of town, and deposited it on a tiny, one-acre bit of land, Erich was down to his last two hundred dollars. He used half of the money to remodel, re-plaster, and re-carpet the cabin. With only two weeks before his first payment was due at the bank, Dad had his first rental home. A sign was placed on the lawn with a price tag that the residents could afford. Standing on the sidewalk, he felt like James Stewart in the movie, "It's A Wonderful Life."

Within forty-eight hours dad had his first tenant. Overjoyed that the bills were going to be paid, he used the money to buy a new house. A year later he bought one of the offices down on the town square. Life was finally looking up for a man who once walked to school barefoot.

As the months swiftly passed, Erich bought more and more of Avoy. People were looking at him and treating him with respect. Towards the end of fifty-seven Mom became pregnant and nine months later gave birth to me. Continuing with the German-Irish tradition, I was named Peter.

Now that I had been born, Dad decided it was time to change. Slowly, overnight, the prices on his houses went up. Tenants weren't given as much time as they previously had to pay their rent. His attitude changed. By the time I celebrated my fifth birthday, Dad had finally made it. He was the richest man in Avoy. To show the whole town that he was in charge, a big decision was made; he bought one of the two identical Swanson Mansions.

Sometime before the Civil War, Frederick Swanson and his brother, Andrew settled in Avoy. Both of them purchased twenty acres and built a mansion for each family on it. Deciding a long time ago that slavery was wrong, the two brothers hired farmers to work the land. When the war broke out, the brothers fled their homes after Atlanta burned. Years passed, and the families never returned, leaving the houses abandoned with the occasional drifter or homeless person moving in. Finally, around eighteen-sixty-five, to the disgust of the town, a carpetbagger bought the house for his family. They didn't stay long and ended up leaving a few short years later.

Around the turn of the century, the homes were rescued by a wealthy historian from Atlanta. The eccentric man moved into one of the mansions, and used the other to store his collections. He lived there until his death in nineteen-thirty-one. Ever since then, the two homes were given million-dollar price tags, and sat empty. On Dad's twenty-seventh birthday, he moved us into one of them. He had arrived. Dad owned half the town, and almost every citizen in Avoy paid him rent. Life turned out just like he always wanted.

******

Peter stopped and raised his head. The looks he received said it all. Nobody spoke. The room was dead silent. Ms. Carol perched on her desk. She looked as if she needed aspirin. Peter wanted everyone to know the truth about his father, and now he honestly believed he had made a grave mistake.

"So," he called out."That's my story."

Peter glanced at his audience. A few students started clapping, then the others quickly followed. Mrs. Carol continued to blink, her eyes conveying her disbelief in what she had just heard. The students were obviously being nice to him. None of them were his friends. In fact he didn't have any real friends, just acquaintances. Nobody really wanted to be your friend when your father had the power to evict you from your home.

Ms. Carol finally found her voice. "Umm, thanks Peter. That is interesting. I think we learned a lot. You, uh, may be seated now...oh, and A+ as usual."

Shaking his head, Peter returned to his desk. A few students continued to stare at him, their mouths agape. He wished a giant, black hole would open up and swallow him.

Ms. Carol floundered around her desk. The clock above the blackboard read fifteen minutes until class let out. Peter began drumming his fingers on the wooden desk, wishing the minute hand would move faster, when suddenly he was interrupted by a knock at the door. Instantly, everyone's attention went in that direction.

"Who in the world," Mrs. Carol muttered to no one. Without warning, the doorknob turned, and the principal, Mr. Johnson, walked in the room.

"Excuse me," he gushed. "There is a new student!" His voice then suddenly rose, "His family just moved into the empty Swanson Mansion!"

Peter could feel everyone's eyes staring at him, waiting for his reaction. He just ignored them, and sat quietly.

"Anyway," Mr. Johnson continued, slightly embarrassed. "His name is Robert Sella, and he is currently in my office. He will be around shortly, so let's make him feel welcome." Nodding his head, the principal left just as fast as he came in. Peter could still feel eyes of the other students upon him.

"Well," Mrs. Carol announced, interrupting the awkward silence. "This is quite a dilemma we have here. We need to make room for Robert." If Peter wasn't embarrassed enough, a student was asked to leave his desk, and a new seat was made available, right next to him. Hoping to change the tension in the room, Peter pretended to read his essay. He knew that as the "rich kid" he possessed a strange power. The students usually copied whatever he did. What did the astrologers call it? The power to sway the common man?

Peter thought this was a dumb reaction. Nobody wanted to be his friend, but they copied every single thing he did. At that moment he was glad to be one of the rich kids. Perhaps he could use this gift for good, instead of evil? With a self-satisfied smile, Peter returned to his essay, when suddenly the classroom door opened again, and the strangest boy Peter had ever lay eyes on walked in.

"Is this Advanced English?" he asked, surveying the room.

So, this must be Robert, Peter thought to himself. The boy was wearing bright green corduroys, a purple sweater, and orange shoes. His black hair barely touched his shoulders. Nobody in town wore colorful outfits. Without a doubt, he was the most unusual person Peter had ever seen.

With fake smile that Ms. Carol only used around Peter and his family, she ran up to the new kid.

"So," she asked in an excited whisper. "You must be Robert? I heard your family moved into the old Swanson place."

The class watched as Robert snapped the gum he was chewing, shrug his shoulders, and answer in a nonchalant tone, "Yeah, it's smaller than our old place in Atlanta."

Ms. Carol blinked her eyes in disbelief. The Swanson Mansions each boasted ten bedrooms. Every person in this class lived in a house that was two rooms, or less. Even Peter found himself surprised by Robert's remark. He watched his teacher jump back in surprise. Stumbling for words, she finally squeaked out, "Oh, well isn't that something else? You know, I think you'll have a lot in common sitting next to Peter Anderson. His father owns the town's real estate company."

Peter felt his face burn in embarrassment as the teacher pointed him out in front of everyone. Was there really any reason for her to single him out like that?

Now," she continued, "just stay right there. I need to rummage through the supply cabinet for your books. We will be reading several novels this semester and I like my students to have their own copies."

Shooting another satisfied smile at Robert, Ms. Carol went to unlock the walk-in supply cabinet. Peter still felt awkward. Shuffling his feet, he looked out one of the small windows, saw nothing of importance, and turned back around. Ever since he was put on the stand, the new kid had continued to stare at him. At first he thought it was out of hatred, but now he believed it to be something else. There wasn't a look of disgust on Robert's face; it was like he was interested in Peter. Nobody had ever stared at him like this before. In a way it scared him, but it kind of thrilled Peter to know that someone admired him.

Smiling back, he turned to make room for Robert.

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I like how you give out information and then hit us with more questions. Giving us details about Peter's life until the divorce and then hitting us with the mysteries of his father's death and daughter's conception are both sneaky. :P Not quite cliffhangers but really keep the reader involved wanting to find out what's really going on. I've a few quibbles. You use a lot of commas in places that the pause doesn't quite work with the flow imo. In this sentence alone you use 6 of them and if you read it out loud the pauses don't feel natural,Since that fateful, yet, wonderful day, almost eighteen years had passed since their faux, marriage had begun, and now, Peter was due at the courthouse at nine sharp. I had another question about Peter's mental state. You end his perusal of his body with something he hates to look at and acknowledge (but don't tell us why, evil!!) and then in the next paragraph you say he is a little satisfied with his observations. It just seemed off since the only thing he liked about himself was his hair and arms and didn't like the rest. Maybe he's used to the bad things, idk, it just seemed out of place to be satisfied after looking at part of his body he hates.

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On 01/29/2011 04:02 AM, Cia said:
I like how you give out information and then hit us with more questions. Giving us details about Peter's life until the divorce and then hitting us with the mysteries of his father's death and daughter's conception are both sneaky. :P Not quite cliffhangers but really keep the reader involved wanting to find out what's really going on. I've a few quibbles. You use a lot of commas in places that the pause doesn't quite work with the flow imo. In this sentence alone you use 6 of them and if you read it out loud the pauses don't feel natural,Since that fateful, yet, wonderful day, almost eighteen years had passed since their faux, marriage had begun, and now, Peter was due at the courthouse at nine sharp. I had another question about Peter's mental state. You end his perusal of his body with something he hates to look at and acknowledge (but don't tell us why, evil!!) and then in the next paragraph you say he is a little satisfied with his observations. It just seemed off since the only thing he liked about himself was his hair and arms and didn't like the rest. Maybe he's used to the bad things, idk, it just seemed out of place to be satisfied after looking at part of his body he hates.
You're right! I'm bad at commas. I'll run through & fix everything. Yes, I love to keep the reader guessing! :) Don't worry, all of your questions will be answered.
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