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2011 - Spring - People Are Strange Entry

The Bed - 1. Poem: The Bed

This is an experiment. I created this image on my computer's paint program. If it is too small to read try using your zoom. I would like input on how to create a better image. Of course if this is impractial, I will change back to text only. The second attempt is text floating over a background done with html code. Which I am only now learning and is hard. Thanks.

  

 

 

 

 

 

The Bed

By bugeye

 

 

This goes round……………………..………… It spins a sound………………………………............. idle

I have hard feelings……………………….... Feelings hard to have…………………..…………...... idée fixe

Love so hard it cuts me…………………........ So love guts me…………................................. idée reçue

I am weak from them………………….……........ These ideas I speak of him

Strong I should be…………………………...... Should I be strong will be or not

It is what I need…………………………........... What is it I need in my head, ideograms

What you heed……………………….............. Heed what you have philosophical

Withdraw this love……………………….…........ Love withdrawn idiolectal

Let it wither and……………………………...... Withers, let it not be idiom mine

Talk no more………………………………........ Past all the talking booboo boobee

doo dal boobee beu

Let it be the past…………………….…………..... Let it be more I meet somebody

But first, tonight………………………………............. Tonight somebody wonderful

Take heart in those…………………….........……. Forget in flight somebody impossible

Other feelings……………………………..........Take this one delight some body next

Joy of the awoken dark……………………….….. Dark joy awaits to mine

In what might have been……………………..... This might have been ibidem

I want my hands to tell this………………..... Your hand on me telling ice

As they give illusion form…………………….... Transforming ordinary ichnite

Can they speak the need……………………...... Need from valley to ichnography

Thru quivering quiet……………………………... Peak of shivering awe ichor

Touch excitable silence…………………….…... Excites touch silently icicle

And fancy create…………………………............ Procreates laughter iconoclastic

Tremorous trembles…………………………........… Ringing bursts iconography

Soft lonely breaths…………………………….....….. Heaving twine idempotent

This my bed…………………………................... Upon the place I lay dream

An isle of landscapes………………………….…... My oasis of night never

Of sun and shade…………………………............. Of moon shadow never

Above a fall of risk……………………….............. The edge of wonder fade

Facing the equator……………………………...... This division of reality

Slumberously slow now………………………….... Away awake aware

A sweet soliloquy………………………….......... The imagined harmony

The place of dreams…………………………….... Dreams of being real

Part of my home……………………........………..... My part at home

My place here……………………………….................. In its place

This place of rest…………………….............….... My final place of rest

Is safe……………………………….......................... Shelter left bare

Share it? …………………………….............................. Entreaty

An invitation rare…………….......…………………..... Almost prayer

Just lust, well no………………………….............…..... Aspiration

To know…………………………................................. Realization

You think……………………........................…........... Uncertainty

Follow me there………..………………......................... Advantage

How easy grace………………………………............... Old cast iron

Performs………………………………....................... Molded into vines

Unconcerned……………………………................... Crown with bronze

With the day……………………..........…………......... With who I lay

As beauty takes a moment to delay

No idle request

No conquest

I see in you the end

Of me

And the start of

This, my garden of need

A dialogue

Strange

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Poem Discussion

 

 

 

Copyright © 2011 Foster; All Rights Reserved.
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On 03/14/2011 11:41 PM, Marzipan said:
Wows! So many ways to read this poem! :D
Thank you Maria.
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hey buggers,

 

this is one strange poem. that's not a bad thing, usually I find poetry a little odd, and yours is no different, so get over it. I'm just not sure if I'm supposed to read across or down or what...

 

If I read across I get one meaning and if I read down I get another... so I guess I can do both, but then I'm not sure which you intended or if you are just a sneaky old coot and meant both and are trying to make me over think this...

 

Lugh

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On 03/16/2011 04:21 AM, Lugh said:
hey buggers,

 

this is one strange poem. that's not a bad thing, usually I find poetry a little odd, and yours is no different, so get over it. I'm just not sure if I'm supposed to read across or down or what...

 

If I read across I get one meaning and if I read down I get another... so I guess I can do both, but then I'm not sure which you intended or if you are just a sneaky old coot and meant both and are trying to make me over think this...

 

Lugh

Thanks Lugh for reading and taking the time to comment. :hug:I made an attempt at clarification of the poem in the discussion thread, if you care to read it.It makes a start at it anyway.I have this urge to write this way. It seems less static.
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Hey Sam,

 

I really enjoy reading your poems tremendously. The truth was I had to re-read this poem, but only because I feel there's something more to it. And the second time I read it, another 'meaning' came to me. Thank you very much.

 

John

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On 03/19/2011 06:05 AM, jian_sierra said:
Hey Sam,

 

I really enjoy reading your poems tremendously. The truth was I had to re-read this poem, but only because I feel there's something more to it. And the second time I read it, another 'meaning' came to me. Thank you very much.

 

John

Thank you Jian, you are kind to read and review.
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