it doesn't make sense when you put a story and you work it out but then people read without leaving a comment. Even a bad one, I wouldn't be left with nothing to work on.
Is the idea attracting the audiance? Is the idea need something to spice it up? Maybe I should make it rated. Maybe I should add some blood Maybe I should change the whole concept. Maybe I should go on with it.
this is why I want reviews. I need answers! I need to answer myself. I need to find this story's voice.
