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Busted chapter 68

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[This one's a bit more ragged than I'd like. The shouty bits don't hang together as well as I want 'em to. Damn this 'no sleep' thing anyway...]

 

Joe was trying to bring himself to eat dinner when his cell rang. He'd picked up Chinese on the way back to the hotel, but his stomach just wasn't up to it. The food sat, cloyingly sweet sauces congealing as it cooled. The suite was filled with the smell of overcooked pineapple and garlic.

 

The day had been pretty much a total loss

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I am having a hard time deciding if I should thank you or strangle you. I'm thinking that thanking you will win out, as strangling you would leave me perched on the edge of this damn seat for all eternity.

 

 

Sharon

 

Wise decision.

 

I am also happy this scene did not come on a friday. A cliffhanger, to keep the chapters hanging together, is one thing. That would have been torture.

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Sheesh, I dunno. you don't post a chapter, they complain. You post a chapter, and they complain. There's just no pleasing some people... :P

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