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B1ue

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I've been attempting for some time to rewrite a story that I originally started in college, then mostly lost the track of in its later stages. Since then, I wrote a sequel, then went back and utterly revised a fundamental aspect of the original story. I know none of this is particularly interesting, but I do have a point: when committing a revision of this magnitude, check your assumptions. Best in fact to check your assumptions about what you've written at the door.

 

In this case, in the original draft, the opening section focused greatly around a rather obstinate character whose sole purpose seems to be to cause me problems during the writing process. Draft two, this is no longer the case, due to the aforementioned major change and how it affect the relationships between the major characters. However, I've just now realized that I've been stubbornly trying to rewrite the damn thing like he was still the central character. There are entire scenes I no longer need, but that I've been trying to rework with ever growing frustration.

 

This has now ceased. Yay me. Actually, I don't really care about this story per se, but I have to get through it so I can go on to its natural sequel, and from there to the story I actually want to write. I'm bored of college age characters, I want to get cracking on proper adults (who, after all, have some relevancy to my life), but first I want to establish their "childhoods."

 

Gah. Hopefully I won't have nearly so many problems when I finally finish revising my first story. It has in some ways just a major change, two characters are going to be combined into one, but since the two characters occupy the same mental territory anyway, I don

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corvus

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Good luck with your novel revisions -- I can't imagine going back and really hacking up a novel. It seems to require a great deal of spiritual well being.

 

PS: On a side note, when ever I read people saying in their blogs that they are having sex constantly, I honestly wonder why they feel the need to share this. I mean, really? Is that something to brag about? I don't think it's sour grapes, but I've not ruled it out either.

I think you're referring to me, as I haven't read anyone else blogging meticulously about their sex lives. Then again, I don't read every blog. It's probably an attention seeking mechanism, and sex hasn't lost its novel allure yet. But I do think it's better than slitting wrists and writing about it.

B1ue

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I think you're referring to me, as I haven't read anyone else blogging meticulously about their sex lives. Then again, I don't read every blog. It's probably an attention seeking mechanism, and sex hasn't lost its novel allure yet.

 

If it was only one person, I would not have said anything. After all, its easy to just assume one person is an anomaly and continue on with my day.

 

And to expand on that point, since your last entry is part of what made me think of this, talking about sex is normal. We, none of us, would be at this site if we were not interested in sex. Its talking about sex when it seems to have no bearing on the rest of what a person has written that makes me wonder what they are trying to say.

 

But I do think it's better than slitting wrists and writing about it.

 

Now that I missed, if you are referring to an actual post somewhere. And even if you aren't, you have a good point here.

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