Replay by RHawes16

[Conner]

Dude,

 

Excellent start on your first story! My heart always goes out to newbie authors on this site. Why you ask? Because there is so much talent here at GA, I believe it takes a lot of courage to put yourself out there. Personally, I'd crawl under a rug or something.

 

Ok, there's a hint of "Do Over" by our very own Dan in your story. I really like what you're doing with it though. That whole concept just fascinates me.

 

Feel free to post Chap 2 anytime.

 

Hugs,

Conner