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Why do I feel our esteemed author is leading us down the garden path?

Maybe it was not Finn?

15 hours ago, Mark Arbour said:

This story has a lot of Will in it, but the focus is definitely Travis. 

Maybe that is your intention, but Will is stealing the show for now. Waiting to see more about Travis and his acting career.

This entire series is focused on Will. All others are simply supporting characters.

1 hour ago, JACC said:

@Mark Arbour, why do your chapters always seem too short? Nice writing, nice plot, good characters… thank you!

I agree, these chapters always leave me wanting more. We do appreciate what we get.

Will has a lot to do to avoid trouble. So much candy at Harvard.

Excellent chapter. I have to read it again.

What a pleasant Christmas gift. Another chapter from my favorite author.

I take sloppy second dibs. This is going to be an interesting story.

I seem to be the first to comment on this exciting chapter.

2 hours ago, Gary L said:

This time…… 😃 

It's never happened before, so I just had to say it.

Elizabeth Danfield is alive and well. That means trouble is coming soon to someone.

Claiming my spot as first.

Finally, I got here first! Now what about those annoying Serbians?

I fear the bad people Taylor was dealing with are not going to disappear.

Wow! Such an incredible escape. 

Thanks for the early chapter.

A little late after you guys. I was watching Moutainhead.

About these burger places. On any given day at any of these places, you can get either a fantastic burger or a lousy burger. Your results may vary.

How did I see this was going to happen?

It scares me when things are going so well. Suppose some shoes will be dropping soon?

Finally, I am the first on this chapter—lots of good and bad.

Nightmares for the missing snake.

It's not nice for us to wish for someone's death. Let's hope our esteemed author delivers all the karma that is deserved.

(Remember the woodchipper scene in Fargo.)