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    Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. ¡¡¡Warning, contains explicit descriptions of adult sexual nature. Do NOT read this if the legislation in your country would make this illegal!!! Cut Shower Scene This was
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    Cut From Chapter 1: In the Old Bull and Bush It was a hot and stuffy August night and the bus ride from Birmingham had been a nightmare: a howling child and roadworks on the M1, but at last it was over, thought Everton Jones to himself, as he hauled a heavy leather bag from the boot of the bus onto the dirty pavement and lit a much needed fag; and then, glancing at his watch, just time for a quick one before the pubs close, and then I can think about finding the Hotel. He had been looking
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    Chapter 6: Peckham Police Station As he was driven off in the police-car, Everton waved goodbye to a shocked Edouard, Kash and Ricqui. He was in the back with a young Sikh policeman, two white guys in front. ‘So, what happens next?’ he asked the Sikh guy. ‘Well…’ he began, ‘Mr.… actually… We aren’t quite sure is it? I mean, are you Mr. Jones or…?’ ‘Look, I told you, my name is “Everton Jones”. This is all a big mistake. I can’t even remember what it says on that bank card!’ ‘Mr. J
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    Chapter 5: Welcome to the Pleasuredrome ‘Hey, this place has really changed,’ Kash said, as they got to the new entrance round the back of the sauna and had the funny card system explained to them at reception. ‘You mean I have to carry this thing around with me all the time Silvio,’ he asked a skinny Brazilian guy behind the counter. ‘Well only if you want to use the credit you’ve just put on it for coffee or a sandwich. Most guys leave them in their lockers, don’t they Ricqui?’ he said,
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    Chapter 4: Celebration in Kudos ‘G-I-R-L-F-R-I-E-N-D… twenty THOUSAND pounds!’ Kash squealed, as they emerged onto the street. ‘No, Three HUNDRED thousand dollars more like,’ Everton replied. ‘Heck yeah! Give me a big five and a hug!’ They threw their arms around each other. ‘We two gorgeous rich kats now!’ ‘Yeah, look, I’m shaking! It’s unbelievable! I need a drink!’ ‘And I know exactly where to get one! Come on, let’s get a train.’ They crossed the road to the station and a car
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    Chapter 3: Mr. Stevens ‘Is the tube always like that?’ Everton asked as they turned out of New Cross Gate station. ‘You mean that Chinese girl? She was hot, wasn’t she?’ Kash replied. ‘What? I meant the boy in the white tee-shirt.’ ‘So did I. Come on Girlfriend, go with the programme. Maybe if you weren’t waving your big dingaling at her? Did you see her little wifey flicking her hair, she knew what was going on and she didn’t like it. But the boy was a bit too girly for me. What do
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    Chapter 2: Breakfast in Kenton The next morning, Kash and Edouard were sharing their usual breakfast of pain au chocolat and coffee in the kitchen. They were keeping their voices down, but had been arguing. ‘Look here,’ Kash was saying, ‘Everton’s had a big shock. Can’t you see? I just don’t want you taking advantage of him.’ ‘Me, take advantage of him? You were the one all over him last night. I think it is you who should be keeping your hands to yourself.’ ‘Well, he is gorgeous, I
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    The Beginning James Stevens waited until the Bank Manager had left the vault before turning the key in the lock and sliding the bank box out of the wall. It felt heavier than most as he thudded it down onto the table in the middle of the familiar, austere room. He came here at the same time every Monday to manage the assets he and his partner Roger Williams had been entrusted with by various crooks, back in the Seventies. Some of them were even household names, synonyms for violence and gr
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    “Can Everton Jones figure out how his father managed to steal Emperor Bokassa’s diamonds and where he hid them before the world and his brother get there first?”
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    Ok, I'm going to see if this works. Thanks to Nephylim there's now a forum for Bokassa's Last Apostle. If you want to talk about the book, please go to the forum, or general chit-chat can go to my email. Yay! I just hope the links work when I put this post up. Chapter 5 went up yesterday. Ta Nephylim!
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    Thanks Nephylim. Hope you liked the latest developments? You kinda got what you wanted, and that's just going to go on being trrue, I think, having seen some of your writing!!! LOL, Absolutely no surprises being spoilt here. I'll try and find the forum and keep writing here for now. There are rather a lot of places to post in here. I think I should keep coming back to the same place for a while. Hi Drewbie, thanks, you're welcome.
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    Hi Everyone, just joined up and have posted the first few chapters of my book "Bokassa's Last Apostle". Anyway, if you like what you see there, I'd love to hear from you. Once I've bust my 5 post limit, I'll try and get a place for people to post about Bokassa's Last Apostle, if there's enough interest. I can't judge how good 237 reads is? Email replies are best at this stage, or REVIEWS!!! Anyway, enjoy reading! Rod.
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