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Iggy

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    Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed reading this! I loved the way that you introduced your characters. By providing them with a past and describing them in the present, it feels almost as if they were real people, their personality traits effectively conveyed through your writing. I can't wait to get to know these guys in the later chapters. Keep up the good work!
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