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  1. Hmmm.. So the cat is out of the bag. I mean Heath now knows what he wants. And so does Alec. But then there's Simon & Nina & the whole web of lies. I hate to think that Alec was involved with Simon in the past. And Simon wants him heart broken coz he was dumped when Alec found out what he did for living. The worst part? I guess it'd have to be the part where Alec finds out the truth about Heath & realizes he's going through what he once did with Simon, again. *sigh* Then again, that's just me & you have something totally different planned for us. Post a bit more frequently Kim. I can't bear the suspense anymore.
  2. Yay.. I'm the first one to post a review! First of all, no worries about the late post. In fact I needed it today... You surely cranked up the hot factor in the first part. Steamy & sexy.. yeah!! Loved the confrontation with Nina. And the part where Heath gets all protective about Alec. Eager to know more about Heath's life. Waiting for the next chapter... As always, good stuff. Love.. Krisz
  3. So Heath is feeling like a teen on a first date. He takes Alec to his special place. And then there's that war between his head and his heart. All signs point to only one thing: LOVE! Heath's falling.. And so is Alec. *dreamy sigh* Though, I haven't forgotten the hurdles that you have put in the way. Who's in that sneaky car? Nina? Simon? Guess we get to know that in next chapter. What does Alec do by the way? Or Heath for that matter? I mean apart from this side business. Let us know more about these guys soon. A nice chapter, specially the text chat & the character Lulu. It is these little things that make the story come to life. The note at the end of the chapter... *appreciative nod*
  4. My reactions: "Heath was told to kill him intimately…crush him" *shudder* " for Heath, it was already too late. There was an instant attraction to Alec" *seeing a small ray of hope* "Bo lied straight faced to Kaila feeling no remorse" *Kaila's gonna end up hurt. U bastard!* “Hey cow, what you want to drink? White wine is cool, and I’m going to spit in your food if you call me a cow again!" *cracking up* "She grabbed a safety pin and started poking holes through the wrappers." *Bitch witch* Perfect pick-me-up for today.. Post next chapter quickly!
  5. Oh my God! You spun in a damn lot of loose threads in these 2 chapters. So many unanswered questions. *sigh* It was interesting to see the guys being physically comfortable on the very first 'date'. Licking the syrup off of Alec's face and the subsequent 'thank you?', nice! I don't like Nina already. And Heath evokes mixed emotions.. Well I guess I'll have to wait and watch. Good stuff!
  6. My favourite author's back with a story! Yay! You had my undivided attention at 'black boxer briefs' I feel this is gonna be a really fun ride..
  7. I was going 'aww' at every sentence! A perfectly sweet ending to the wonderful world that you created for us to enjoy.. I'm gonna terribly miss the guys & the kids. Specially David Kim you are a gifted author. I just can't describe in mere words the feelings that course through me when I read your stories. I would call your work art. Keep doing this fab stuff forever... P.S. Can we see more of romantic courting in your next story? You know like the process of meeting someone and falling in love with them. You might have plans already but I have this feeling you would be the best one to pen that kind of material down perfectly. P.P.S Umm.. aaa.. Umm.. Love you! *blushes*
  8. Beautiful chapter! You painted a wonderful picture with your words, I could totally visualise the whole scene. The stolen kisses, kids, suited grooms, guests applauding. Perfect!
  9. Love u Kim(in a totally non-internet-stalker appropriate way) Yay!! *breaks into a little jig* I'm going to the wedding! Do I need to say more?!
  10. Krisz

    Chapter 1

    Hmmm... I can totally identify with the guy! Going through this yes-no-i don't know phase.. I'm not confused regarding my 'preferences' but who do I confide in? *sigh*
  11. Dear Kim.. Sorry for the late review. I've just finished with a horrible semester exam. The last two chapters were superb! Now I want a David & a Ethan. Get back to me as soon as the order is processed.. Now what I want to remind you is that I haven't forgotten that missed phone call. I hope its nothing terrible. It shouldn't cause any glitch with the wedding plans. Consider yourself warned. Other readers are welcome! In other news: I'm addicted to your writing.. Keep churning out awesome stories.
  12. You go girl!! Just when I thought it couldn't get any better you post a very tastefully handled steamy chapter which fogged my screen! Smoking hot!! I can't seem to stop writing exclamatory sentences... []
  13. Tag's prescription worked! A very well written chapter.. Loved all the mushy stuff in there Keep up the amazing work!
  14. Awesome chapter! Loved every single word of it.. Can I please marry David? No? Oh he's taken. Can you find me someone like him?
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