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Gee whiz... this story is getting pretty gruesome... I guess you're doing an amazing job but man, these are awful things to think about. You're so descriptive, and your words are riveting, but this is really hard to read! I guess I'm a bit of a wimp though... you must be doing an ace job though, because I kind of have to read the next chapter now, not an option really.

What a wonderful chapter! Dr. Baker is so amazing, haha, I love her character. Your imagery of her jewelry etc. was fantastic! So much fun!

Chapter 6 was incredible! You've built up the characters so perfectly, to the point where I NEED to know what happens! It's a must! Therefore, I believe you are doing an amazing job and I'm really pumped for you!

ComeWhatMay's debut work on Gay Authors, Falling Slowly, is an emotional and fluid work, tracing a turbulent period in the character's—Matthew and Anthony's—relationship. Beginning, the reader is immediately introduced to the conflict; When the balance between the professional and personal relationship becomes blurred. The reader is spared from the background details, allowing for a more immersive and engaging experience, something that is appreciated in a short story. While there is a lack of environmental imagery, it is made up for by the plentiful detail put into describing the character's facial expressions, clearly asserting the importance of the character's relationship between each other. Maintaining the theme of Selflessness versus Selfishness, the reader feels the turmoil Matthew undergoes as a part of deciding how he should show love to his partner, and when he needs to listen to his own needs. This universal message is built by ComeWhatMay's careful implementation of pathos. While Falling Slowly carries a generally somber mood for the duration of the story, it is accented by bursts of hope, and moments of doubt. Falling Slowly is an excellent first work, as well as a fine piece of drama. A must read for those who enjoy tales of sorrow and love.

Ugh, I love this story so much! I just die every time waiting for the next chapter! :) Can't wait for the next! Chapter 3 was so great! I <3 Charlie!!!