Hey PoisonIvy - I am glad I went back this morning to check - as I forgot to print chapter 3 - and was kinda pissed at you at the end of chapter 5 - thinking "this is it!!!!". But pissed in a good way now - because I think you have the potential of a wonderful book here. Of course - I am at work and have to read chapter three as yet. I love reading books that give perspectives form all sides - as how you have done with Eli vs Viz, and i am interested in Jake (and his perspective). The romantic in me does not want this to be an unhappy ending. Please, please keep doign what you are doing; it is already making for a good story, so cannot wait for the rest. Best of wishes
