Pandosan

It was an awesome story, your spelling and grammar were excellent. It was an interesting plot. My only issues with it were a) It seemed like a very long, and detailed, story plan. The ideas are there, and it made reading it very easy, but I feel that if you essentially took every sentence you had there, and expanded on them to create seperate chapters in and of themselves, it would be very good. My second issue was that, not that I am at all berating it, it just made the story seem way too unrealistic in a very technical and scientific story that you had started, was that you seemed to promote that gay's/bi's were the only cure. I'm unsure why, but it just seemed to paint heterosexuality in an overly bad light. Overall, I'd rate it 4 out of 5.