MichaelJames
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Don, I am really glad to see you made over to this site. This is a great story. I enjoyed reading it when you first developed it. Good going, man!
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I am confused about direction this is taking. Very good involvement of the characters.
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Who is Jude? Do yu mean Jase. I know you have had some [revious name confusion. Jude was out of left field. mjp I am enjoying the read. . That’s what I told myself fifteen minutes after I got back with Jude and started to dial Aaron’s number. Talking to Jude had made me feel better about things; maybe having an honest conversation with Aaron about Seth would have the same effect. And, if I could do it without getting pissed off, maybe Aaron would listen. At least, I imagined that he would have listened, if he had answered his phone.
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This chapter was about two chapters late in coming. What a relief.
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The framing of the story is great. I have spent the better part of th owrk day folowing Rory. The character developement is great. I am waiting to hear what Aaron has done to Luke and what Aaron has in store for Rory. I am enjoying wathchiing this story develop. Great writing. MJP
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Thank God for I-Pad & Kindle. At least that helps for the cardio. Sound recordings will allow you to listen and be inspired to perform in your workout!
