I know you said that my comments doesn't count since it's me but I wanted to left one anyway.
You know how I love this story. I was right there at the beginning and frankly I was afraid you wouldn't pursue it. I know that I said I was proud of myself because of the 5 chapters thing but really it's your writing that made people like your story.
You made us love Kaleb and Chase and hate some other too.
We didn't talk about this chapter since I didn't had time to beta it but I want to know that I particulary love it. The first kiss was spectacular and I love how Chase stood up for himself and there realtionship to Helen.
I can't wait to read the next chapter (that should be in my email by now, psst psst).
I love you girl.