silentdreamer

So many things to wrap my mind around, lol. I loved the idea of another parallel story with Felix. Many interesting facts had already made me waiting for the next chapter. Update soon.

Fantastic Chapter but a short one. I was waiting for this chapter for past ten days and now I want the next one. @Emi- Even that pathway reminded me of Rama Sethu though that was made of floating rocks. I thought I was the only one felt that way. Glad to know I was not alone. I'm not even sure what Abraham did here. What's gonna happen to Axel? Is he gonna any more visions or that was a one time thing? Endless questions and mysteries and like Emi I think you're slow, please write faster, lol.

Amazing!!! I loved this thrilling chapter and the vision in the end was superb. so many mysteries are piling up one after another and that's exciting. Looking forward for you to post chapter soon!!

Finally, Ed and Zune met again after that night. I hope Ed actually remembers everything from that night and it's not all in just Zune's head. Keep the chapters coming.

New story! Yay! Promising beginning. Can't wait to uncover all the mysteries along with Axel.

I have nothing new to add to what Jt_hooks mentioned though I'm happy to get these no-cliffie chapters, lol, but I am getting a feeling that you are going to do something really wicked to these friends really soon. Fingers crossed!

At last Ed confessed his feelings. I was waiting for a long time for both of them getting back to their senses. I'm praying that Ed remembers everything when he come back from his homophobic father.

Very good chapter. But Zune and Ed's stupidity is irritating me to hell. I don't know when they will accept the obvious feelings between them. Carol and Mich didn't surprised me but Jake meeting Ron's parents did. Well, it seems Jer is good for Jake. And Steph need to stand for himself this time otherwise I see him getting hurt again. I want to see more of Ed and Zune. Let's see how long they stuck to their stubbornness.

I am sure Stephen is going to hurt again because I think Kev is still having feelings for Zune. On the other hand Zune and Ed are being stubborn and getting on my nerves. I mean it is clear to everybody except them that they are made for each other. And I think Jer should give some time to Jake to move on. His meeting with that detective was suspicious but I hope it will not come out as another disaster in Jake's or Zune's life. Update soon and let us know about my favorite characters!!

Zune and Edward are oblivious to their emotions. They are stupid. They both know what's going on between them yet trying to avoid the obvious. Jer seemed, as Jake thinks, shady to me but we no nothing about him yet. I love Jenny. She is as amazing as Carol. After a long time a chapter with no cliffhanger...keep them coming!

All the emotions in this chapter from the various characters was phenomenal. Stephen's anger, Zune's dilemma, Kev's helplessness, Carol's childish behavior, Ed's happiness, Ron's cute surprises and in the end a broken Jake. Ron died on Jake's birthday, what could be more heartbreaking? Kudos for another incredible chapter!

Stephen-is -back. Stephen is back! Wow! Just wow! Didn't see that coming. When I read this chapter last night I was really jumping in my bed, lol. I don't know what Kevin and Edward would do when they find out. I agree with Lisa, Michelle and Carol need to take anger management class together, lol. Sheila was mysterious. I don't want to know about her predictions, lol. Great chapter. Loving the twists in story so far. Will look forward for your next update.

Carol is awesome! she is great! She is such a loyal friend. Gotta love her. I am happy that Jake is back and safe though I am not very keen to see him together with Ron. Loved this chapter and awesome Carol!

Read all the three chapters last night which I missed. Granny was a character, lol. She played a vital role in Zune's recovery. Jake is great and Ed is a Jackass. Good work!

A very sad chapter. Poor zune, I'm sure Jake and Edward will help him together to come out of this trauma and this journey to Edward's grandmother will finally bring happiness in zune's life. Looking forward to this journey.