Jump to content

HarmonicDreamer

Author
  • Posts

    16
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by HarmonicDreamer

  1. Blair, Cam and I were all over Blair's house getting ready for the first football game of the season against Beverly Hills High. Our schools have had this football rivalry since forever. The last 3 years, since we've been Freshmen, ECR has won the game every single time. We had a pretty solid season last year too, 9-1. I wasn't really a big football fan, but since Blair was a cheerleader and Cameron loved watching the guys, I went to most of the games anyway. Blair was in her bathroom straighten
  2. HarmonicDreamer

    Chapter 5

    I'm one of those people who take 2 or 3 showers a day, and you know what, that does seem kind of awkward reading it back, so I can easily edit that part out. About the kids and gay thing, I literally took that from an experience I had with a close friend of mine, and that's how his mom reacted, so I thought it would be cool to use in this story. You're really good at catching things and bringing stuff to my attention that I missed rereading the chapter over!
  3. I cleaned my room up, picking up stray pieces of paper, reorganizing my bookcase, made my bed properly instead of just laying the comforter straight across and slopping the pillows on top. I also swept the dust and dirt off the maple hardwood floors. I went to my desk and straightened everything out so everything had it's place. I went to my dresser and re-alphabetized all of my toiletries. I had colognes and perfumes, some that I wore, some that I used as room sprays and some I used as fabric s
  4. HarmonicDreamer

    Chapter 4

    Oooh thanks for those mistakes! I thought I caught them so I'm gonna edit them. With the theater class, there's about 22 kids in all, but the ones who usually gang up are the 10 that are mentioned in the story (Ashley, Blair, Cameron, Catherine, Chelsey, Harrison, Hunter, Lauren, Nick, Trace) so I just focused on them. I'll try to fix the errors and be more careful to keep everything consistent. I have so many ideas going on in my head, and when I'm writing so it may become a little wonky sometimes. I really appreciate your feedback. Even if you're the only one. Helps me become better.
  5. I woke up at exactly 5:30, tired of my alarm on my phone. I went to my bathroom and turned the shower on scorching hot and let it steam up for a minute or two. I stepped in and let the water cascade on my body. I poured a little bit of lavender oil in the steam shower opening and let it calm me. It's a new day and I wanted a new mindset. I washed my hair, and bathed my body and just let the lavender oil relax and soothe me. 20 minutes later, I was in my closet, looking for something to wear. I d
  6. HarmonicDreamer

    Chapter 3

    You're skipping ahead with the first question there lol. I should have made it more clear that I imagined the unknown girl were consistently in contact, like it wasn't just a random act of contact. Blair is for sure a take on the Queen B herself, but she isn't as abrasive and conniving as Blair of Gossip Girl. She's a bit more laid back and bubbly but that's definitely were the main inspiration comes from. I have a twist for Cam and Josh's storyline. I'm deciding on which way to go, but I'm definitely planning something for them. Don't you just hate guys who want both things? And they can't be faithful and committed to just one? The pictures... I went through many tumblrs trying to find a solid fit for both Christian and Trace. I couldn't come close to what I envisioned for them both, so they were the basic descriptions, without the tattoos of course. I'm still looking for a perfect match of Cameron, but I have Blair of course. Also I have a perfect girls for the theater scene and I have a pretty good feel for Harrison and Hunter. Chapter 4 should be up by the middle of the week! Thank you so much for commenting.
  7. I continued to stare at Christian as he walked away, and I couldn't help but smile. "Tray, you have this incredibly goofy look on your face. What's up?" Cam said, as Blair agreed. "You've been acting funny all day. What's gotten into you?" Blair said as we walked out of the school doors. "I have no clue what you two are talking about. I'm good. I promise," I replied to both of them, laughing it off. "Mmmmmm, yeah sure, Tray. We know you better than anyone. I can read you like a book. I'm
  8. I walked Gracie back to the house, thinking about my encounter with the guy a few minutes ago. He was so gorgeous. I didn't even know anything about the guy. He probably had a girlfriend, but it didn't stop me from admiring his beauty. I put some food and water in Gracie's tray and grabbed my keys. It was still fairly early, around 6:45, so I decided to get something to eat from Sonic. I decided on a breakfast sandwich of biscuit, egg, bacon and cheese. After I picked up my food, I went to Mulho
  9. This story is about finding happiness and finding love, having that love and make it withstand trials and tests. The main character is called Trace and he's an independent and strong guy. He's starting his senior year in high school and he meets an engaging and charismatic kid by the name of Christian. Let's see where this story takes us! This story is inspired by a song I heard so the storyline kind of ties into the song, check it out yourself!
  10. I woke up at 5:45 on the nose, my phone chirping out the annoying alarm to wake me. I walked to my bathroom and stepped inside the shower. I turned the water to a steaming hot waterfall, letting the water soak me. It was so relaxing and calming, showering in the still of the morning. After about 20 minutes, I got out of the shower and looked in the mirror. Full head of dreadlocks that came a bit past my shoulders, big doe-like dark brown eyes, a medium brown glowing complexion, a thin, lean body
  11. I got vanilla. I'm so not vanilla.
  12. Hey yawll! I'm new, obviously. I love reading and writing. At first it was poems, then it turned into songs. I just got into actually writing stories and hopefully, I'll share them with you all, and you'll like them.
  13. I'm absolutely loving Rather Die Young by Beyoncé. I seriously can listen to this song like 50 times in a row.
  14. Shemar Moore is the only one on the poll that interests me.
  15. Question 1 - Autumn. Question 2 - Lightening Storm Question 3 - Castle Question 4 - Chariot Question 5 - Lightmaking Question 6 - Fleetness of the foot Question 7 - Intelligence Question 8 - Knowing your friends Question 9 - Mysterious Amazon Question 10 - Wisdom is correct knowledge correctly applied Question 11 - Old and experienced Question 12 - Imperial city filled with murder, intrigue and fortune.
×
×
  • Create New...