Oooh thanks for those mistakes! I thought I caught them so I'm gonna edit them. With the theater class, there's about 22 kids in all, but the ones who usually gang up are the 10 that are mentioned in the story (Ashley, Blair, Cameron, Catherine, Chelsey, Harrison, Hunter, Lauren, Nick, Trace) so I just focused on them. I'll try to fix the errors and be more careful to keep everything consistent. I have so many ideas going on in my head, and when I'm writing so it may become a little wonky sometimes. I really appreciate your feedback. Even if you're the only one. Helps me become better.