Jump to content

swoop67

Members
 View Profile  See their activity

  • Posts

    68

  • Joined

  • Last visited

 Content Type 

Everything posted by swoop67

  1. swoop67
    That is very different from you. It is nice like they have said to see things thru the eyes of a young boy. I hope that this continues and shows him as he grows and tries to figure things out. Bret
  2. swoop67
    I wasnt sure where he was headed with this too. I am sure lieing to his dad was getting harder and harder to do. I have to get to the next chapter to keep up!!! Nice Job
  3. swoop67
    Very well done Nick. Your writing can really make you see what you are reading. You keep growing as a writer. Dont ever stop writing. Bret
  4. swoop67
    I am so happy for you. I told you that you were a great writer and not just saying it because we are friends. Bret
  5. swoop67
    It was hard to read the last part. Is there more going on then what meets the eye. It definitely will keep me wondering what next. Bret
  6. swoop67
    Yes it is an amazing start to a new story. I am sure there will be twists and turns along the way. Keep the chapters coming.
  7. swoop67
    It was very different but nice. I am sure this will take on a life of its own. Bret
  8. swoop67
    All I can say is wow. That was so cool of a way to end things. I am thankful for all of those who have responded to Nick and helped him become the writer he is. :ranger: Bret
  9. swoop67
    The plot thickens....I wonder where this is headed. It seems there are things we dont know.... Thanks again Nick. Bret
  10. swoop67
    This could be a great story to spin off of. I am sure he will keep us waiting in suspense. Thanks Nick. Bret
  11. swoop67
    Yeah Kevin has sex on his mind all the time. He has been on an emotional rollercoaster for sure. Ready for the next chapter Nick!!!
  12. swoop67
    Let me know when they are ready as I cant wait to read them.
  13. swoop67
    This isnt what I have been expecting. This could get real interesting. Like Michael said...this is going to get interesting and be kind.
  14. swoop67
    I think it will get real interesting when they all finally meet up at the same time. I would like to be a little mouse in the corner when that happens. Bret
  15. swoop67
    I agree the his parents will stay out of things and let them happen as they may. I am glad the chapter went as it did.
  16. swoop67
    I agree with Michael!!! What is going on??? That next chapter better be close behind. Bret
  17. swoop67
    I am not sure who Kevin really wants. This chapter did make you wonder what is really going on in his mind. I think he was so starved for love and attention earlier in his life he isnt sure what he should do.
  18. swoop67
    That was a very moving chapter. I am glad that he finally got the nerve and did tell his dad. I agree the he had supressed a lot of things in his mind and coming out made them all come back to him. Nice Job!
  19. swoop67
    I agree he had a bad influence on him, but I think with all going on in his mind it was too easy to do that to escape facing things.
  20. swoop67
    I am glad he got to see his Mom again. I think that is what he needed to try to move forward. Nice writing and I am on to the next chapter.
  21. swoop67
    This is one of my favorite writings. It really hits home with what goes on in the real world. You have a gift to write and please keep on doing so no matter what anyone else thinks. I am glad I got to read it. Now where is the sequel???
  22. swoop67
    I want to know what you think of his writings. I can't seem to get him to think that his stories are very good. I just want him to see that he is a good author. Thanks. Bret
  23. swoop67
    wow...this gets better all the time. I agree with the others and I cant wait for the next chapter.
  24. swoop67
    I am going to have to keep reading the rest....Nice job
  25. swoop67
    I love it. That is short but so well done and it makes u remember what Christmas is really all about. Thanks Nick.
×
×
  • Create New...