MartyS

What evil is this!?!?! No evil. Simply telling it like it is I've been framed!!!! No Frame. Simply facts Now I ask, would I ever do anything sneaky??? CJ = Sneaky Especially sneaky editing of things... I've been slandered!!! It is not slander to tell the truth The only edit I made to the poll after creating it was to add the "I don't know!" choice. I didn't touch the other questions, once I'd created them... And as for how that "not" got in there, must've been a typo.... You already used the typo excuse in a previous post.There are THREE letters in the word NOT. I find it very difficult to understand how anyone can make three consecutive typos accidently I never use cliffhangers.... yet Talonrider's siggy accuses me of it, Talonrider's is simply stating an existing fact. The Award Certificate proves that. and Marty, I'm shocked, absolutely shocked, at your new siggy!! All my new signature does is advertise an existing fact And E tu, Cia? After I so helpfully campaigned for you? I am quite sure Cia can speak for herself, I will refrain from defending her righteous statement. Connor, thank you for being the voice of reason.... I do not believe it would be appropriate for me to comment on this. As we all know, deep down inside, I'd never be sneaky, or use cliffhangers... Let me examine this response closely. You are denying having committed two despicable actions. First you deny being sneaky. Then you deny using cliffhangers. The proof is in the pudding, to quote an old saying. A collection of your Peers, (I hope the readers of this forum don’t object to my putting them down to your level) Anyway the majority of the qualified voters convicted you and declared you to be, “The King of Cliffhangers.” Everyone knows an author who uses cliffhangers has to be sneaky. Therefore, neither of your defenses are proper. , I rest my case.

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Thank you very much, CJ. I needed to have a good laugh, and after reading this post I was ROTFLMAO. I am so pleased about your comments regarding my new Signature.

Hi Benji, I think you are heading in the right direction. Joel has already shown he is getting suspicious about Bridget. Neither he nor Lisa know anything about George. Joel is not saying much to Lisa about Bridget, because he knows Lisa thinks the Witch walks on water. However Joel is facing problems with Gonzalez. This is from Chapter 84. The Sergeant is talking to Henry and part of what he says is: Just to be sure, I’ll poke around in his finances a bit to see if there’s any large unexplained income, but he seems like he’s okay.” Earlier in the story (Previous chapter)Gonzalez and Henry are talking and one of them mentions maybe Joel has been bought off by Bridget. We know Joel brought back about $5.000 dollars from the Med. Joel told Trevor he would hold it for him. Joel also has $6,000 from the sale of Trevor's junker. Chances are Joel put the money in his bank account for safekeeping. I believe Gonzalez is going to discover this money. That is my opinion Marty

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It might work if the person is sitting in an Interview Room in a police station, and the subject cannot end the grilling and walk away. BTW is not Trevor the Complainant and victim? .

Hi Benji, Sorry but I disagree. First of all, no one except Bridget and George know about the Love Nest being bugged. It is possible Sanchez was told. Gonzalez is still questionable about exactly what Joel's relationship with the Wicked Witch is. When he discovers the money Joel has from the sale of Trevor's junker, I bet he reads him a Miranda Warning. Wait and see. Marty

Ahhhh Yes, I can just make out the sly, evil look in his eyes.

Thank you TalonRider for this information. CJ was so helpfull in explaining how to set up a poll. Than when I goofed, he ever so nicely corrected my error. Then, the lowlife changed the question by inserting the word NOT, completely altering the question

I believe that is exactly what I suggested, as a first step. However, he did not do what I recommended as the second step. Sergeant Gonzalez was totally and completely wrong in what he did, and needs to be reigned in, period. A professional investigator would have contacted Trevor to establish the facts, first. Then if the information received from Trevor supported his suspicions, possibly contact Joel for an explanation. The fact that Sergeant Gonzalez created a situation by making an accusation against Trevor, during an interview he had no control over the interviewee, indicates to me, his lack of professionalism.

CJ That was real sneaky changing the Poll Question

Thank you

If I were in Trevor's place, I would not have answered or returned any additional telephone contact with Sergeant Gonzalez. I would have telephoned Joel and arranged for a telephone conference with Joel's father. During that conference, after explaining the nature of the accusations, suggest he confer with an attorney. I am sure an attorney would know how to handle the abusive sergeant. I am looking forward to Sergeant Gonzalez's reaction when he learns about the money Joel has in his possession from the Mediterranean Charter and the sale of Trevor’s junker.

Not sure what I did wrong setting up a poll.

I say, Yes!

Let me explain what CJ did to us in Chapter 85. He shoveled a vast load of codswallop when he posted it. Never mind the Official Word Count on the Title Page. In actuality from the first word of the chapter title until the last actual word of the final paragraph, Chapter 85 contained just about 6766 published words. Approximately 5260 words or almost 78% of the story was, “Bumf.” I find it extremely difficult to recall, a more non-professional demonstration of proper police investigative techniques and practices. Based on the published content of the actions of the principle investigator, Sergeant Gonzalez, Bridget’s description and opinion of him is IMHO, all to accurate. I am utterly amazed at the willingness of Henry to become involved in such a farce. Were it not for the fact that, “ The Goat,” created and inserted this abortion, to continue his campaign, of “long-term Cliffhangers, I would be inclined to nominate, both of these investigators for, "The Inspector Lestrade Award for Incompetent Police Investigation."

Hi Benji, I need some assistance. I would like to set up Poll, but do not know how. If you are familiar with the procedure please give me some help, Thank you Marty

LowFlyer My comments regarding Cliffhangers are posted in the Chapter 85 Thread. Once again, CJ is jerking us along.

Lets take a look at Cliffhangers. First and foremost, the entire Chapter 85 is a cliffhanger. When Chapter 84 ended we were left hanging with the: 1 Hitman was setting up a search to locate Trevor. 2 Kline was about to try a scam on the Officers to locate Trevor. 3 Trevor and Shane were heading into problems when they arrive in Carnarvon. 4 The reporters in Perth were about to get the word. None of these were addressed. Instead over half the chapter was about a scam arranged by Gonzalez and Henry. Then look at Chapter 85 1 All probability is that Joel and Lisa will not be allowed to go to Australia. 2 Chances of getting any evidence against Bridget and George are getting slimmer all the time. 3 Trevor has arranged to make an extensive telephone call to Joel on Monday. This will be when Joel and Lisa are in their Love Nest. Bridget will record the conversation. All kinds of info will be discussed.

Check your emails 2 of them

Yes we will Slanga Marty

OK I'll wait

I think you have to remember one thing about CJ. He wouldn't know the truth if it bit him on the butt. He lies like a rug. This is my suggestion. Print out his reply. Mount the page alongside your monitor. While you read the upcoming chapters, compare how you feel about them. Do you feel a high level of tension? How many cliffhangers are in each chapter? After you are finished, you can join one of two groups. The first group knows they cannot trust, "The Goat." The second group thinks they can trust him. I have not heard of many readers admitting to being in Group 2.

Last of the big time spenders. But, if everyone gave the same amount that means 371 readers donated.

Seeing as he lives n Australia, maybe we could get a Government Grant