BillyButch

Great story. Cal’s difficult, and high-maintenance, but grows on you. Davey’s almost a cipher, but has enough personality to not completely disappear. I loved how Cal was a fucking foul mouthed asshole, but revealed his insecurities and sweetness; easy to see the defensive posture. Thanks!

We bide our time, not bid it, though we may bid others to bide if it's something we've stood for for all our life. Two 'for's are not redundant.