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Sagitta137

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  1. Thanks c: It's all starting to come together in my mind now
  2. I didn't want to get closer to Terku, but I had to. I had a feeling that there was no way I was going to convince Ashi to leave unless we had Terku as well.. or at least if he stopped moving. I won't lie, I was considering waiting until Ashi looked away and then twisting that pipe, assuming it was impaling a vital area (I had yet to leave the desk). Don't judge me though, I mean don't you think it would be much more humane to end his misery rather than having him suffer through the hell of the h
  3. Thanks c: I figured out how the entire story's gonna go so it's easier to make it flow now ^^
  4. By the time the weather calmed, I had no idea how long it had been. I mean, when it seems like the world is being split apart and you hear the screams of your friends around you, the last thing on your mind is 'hey, when's the bell gonna ring?'. No, I if can remember correctly, I'm sure dozens of swears bombarded my mind, well that and the overwhelming need to protect Ashi. I think he was the reason I maintained sanity and consciousness while I heard the screams turn to gurgles. I just held tigh
  5. Thanks ^^ And i'll try not to make so many mistakes last time, i pretty much posted this right after i wrote it so i didn't feel like editing closely, although that's not to say if i waited that i would edit any better And i have not idea what i'm gonna make this all be, lol. I mean, i have some ideas, but with this story i thought it would be more entertaining for me if i write it as i go, so i'm still not even sure how it's gonna end. At least this way i can have people tell me what they want to happen in the future of it ^^
  6. Haha, thanks they're actually Indonesian based names. They have them for a reason, but i'll explain that later And yeah i need to mind an editor, i suck at going over my own stuff 'cause i get bored half way through editing because i already know what's gonna happen, lol.
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    Apocalypse

    A story of a teenager, Panah, who lives through a cataclysmic event and must figure out how to survive and who to trust in the devastation afterwards.
  8. We all sat in class as I tried to focus on the droning teacher's voice on the wonders of Chemistry. I have always had a deep hatred for it and my friends weren't helping me with their constant distractions. Terku (tear-ku) kept poking my shoulder as Ashmara watched, giggling each time I flinched. Had a different person be doing this, I’m certain I would, at the very least, snap their finger backwards, maliciously enjoying the crack of their bone, but not for Terku. Not with his dark brown eyes a
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