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If you haven't seen this segment on the Colbert Report yet, you should watch this video: http://www.takepart.com/article/2013/08/17/stephen-colbert-gay-rights
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Oh thank you, i do most of my writing around midnight in one sitting, so it's easy for me to miss a few typos. Normally i check over my work, but recently i've been too tired to do it.And as fart as the prepositions, part of it's on purpose, because i want to stay 'in character,' if that makes any sense, but i'm also trying not to be obnoxious with it, so i will try to tone it down more.
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I've played both and i have to say PC is better, but xbox is more convenient, because it doesn't slow down my computer x.x Also multiplayer is easier on the xbox version.
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I kind of wish it was longer, because what you wrote was very good
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I agree with everyone else. It's a compelling start that captures my attention, but it kinda seems like a poem at first. Overall I like it though ^^
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Thank you I just love zombies to much to write a normal love story
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Thanks
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It’s been two days since I first typed up that journal entry, or whatever the hell I should call it. Pretty much I thought I would be able to get along fine without it, but it turns out it helps me a lot. That’s kinda sucky though, because I don’t want to be lugging around a laptop with me, but it’s not that bad. Maybe I’ll just save my entries on a flash drive and get a new laptop each time I stop. At this point most houses are abandoned, so it shouldn’t be too hard to find one. Sitting
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I used to be like you. I used to think that the zombie apocalypse would be kinda fun and exciting. I secretly hoped it would happen like everyone else. But that’s because, like you, I thought it would be like all the videogames or movies or books. Let me tell you one thing though: It’s not even close. I should probably make one thing clear though. I have no idea who you are or why you are reading this, and quite frankly, I don’t really care. For all I know, you could have put a bullet thr
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I used to be like you. I used to think that the zombie apocalypse would be kinda fun and exciting. I secretly hoped it would happen like everyone else. But that’s because, like you, I thought it would be like all the videogames or movies or books. Let me tell you one thing though: It’s not even close.
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Thank you ^^ and yeah i kinda try to tone it down for writing, but i still want a 'shock factor' or something like it.
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Haha yeah i kinda like disturbing writing ^^ And i was intending to just keep this as a one-chapter story, but there is more i could add on. So i might later, but for now i'm gonna work on a new story. And thank you very much for pointing that out. I completely missed that typo x.x So i appreciate it a lot
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Maybe I should start by telling you what I look like, but that wouldn’t be much fun, now would it? I mean, most others don’t really know what I look like, except they probably only catch a blurred glimpse of me; and you don’t really think I’m going to let you be more privileged than them, do you? I’ll let you know just what I think they see. That way I can keep it fair. Let’s see, I think most people would notice the paleness of my face under the moons light, and I’m thinking in the dark my
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For a while my mind just stumbled dumbly though a haze. Like a drunken idiot trying to find his way out of the bar, it just kept tripping over itself, keeping me safe in the realm of unconsciousness. Now, probably I should have heard the glass break, or the screams, or felt people shake me, but as the past few hours have taught me, probability doesn’t mean shit anymore. So, basically I have no idea how long I stayed there, but I can tell it was at least a day or two from a few things. First
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“Panah! Pahan!” was all I heard, along with a frantic banging against the door when I woke up. “I-I'm okay Ashi,” I weakly choked out as I opened my eyes and found myself lying on the floor of the shower. The steamy water cascaded over my skin, but I had a feeling the steam came from the water vaporizing as it hit my burning flesh. My neck burned horribly, but I decided it would be best if I didn't tell Ashi or Ling.. I mean, why worry them? “Open the door,” I heard Ashi plead from the other s
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Ashi and I both ran down those ancient stairs and out into the street without thinking. “Human! Human!” we yelled, as the girl began to swing her sword. “This way,” I pointed off to the right, to a road the led to a more rural part of town. We ran for about ten minutes, all the time our already weary legs beginning to stumble beneath us and our hearts feeling as though they were on the verge of eruption. We kept running though because behind us trailed several shadowy figures, although I could
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“Shit!” We yelled simultaneously. We had no idea where to go, nor what to do, so swearing seemed like a pretty good use of our time while we thought of a plan. “Hey, doesn't this place have a second floor?” Ashi asked, and thankfully, I realized he was right. As many of these shops cost a lot of money to rent out, the owners generally converted the second floors to their living areas, and I prayed Jerry's was no exception, so we both ran to the far end of the store, searching frantically in the
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“Panah!” Ashi yelled, as I let out a scream and fell backwards. When Ashi ran to my side I started laughing. “Got you,” I said giggling. In response Ashi sighed, punched my playfully on the shoulder and hugged me. “If you do that again..” He warned, probably figuring my imagination would come up with a better punishment than he would be able to. “Okay, okay, I'm sorry, but I don't know what you're talking about. These things don't burn at all” With that, I held up my arm to him, exposing abou
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Chapter 5: From Decimation to Destruction
Sagitta137 commented on Sagitta137's story chapter in Chapter 5: From Decimation to Destruction
Haha, I don't really think about this stuff all the time, but when I write I try to think of stuff to shock the reader, or at least catch their attention. In short, be happy that I censor myself ^^ -
Chapter 5: From Decimation to Destruction
Sagitta137 commented on Sagitta137's story chapter in Chapter 5: From Decimation to Destruction
Sorry, I already wrote in zombies later on, 'cause I love them But they're only mentioned briefly and I don't make them a big deal at all, just wanted them to be around to add to the apocalypse stuff and other plot-ish stuff ^^ -
We walked along in silence for a while. I'm pretty sure we were both just tired, well at least I know I was. I'd just gotten my face gashed open, hit my head pretty hard on the ground, and gotten my neck chewed up; all in probably less than.. a few hours (I hadn't been keeping track of the time). So I was pretty much ready to rest. I wasn't in a lot of pain though, just a dull ache in my head and neck. I really didn't feel my cheek anymore, I think my body just got used to the pain there, so I j
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Haha, it's a secret
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Well creepy is awesome And Panah's alive, there's no way in hell that I'm gonna get to the end of this story and be like "he was dead the whole time" or "it was just a dream" It'll come together later. And so far the sky is all black so regardless of night or day, the appearance doesn't change. I'll expand more on that later as well and it will make more sense, but I'm trying not to give stuff away ^^ And thanks ^^ I think I'll post 4 chapters a week until I'm done.
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Copper. Straight through the roses came a distinct scent of copper. My mind clung to that scent as it slowly pulled me from the depths of unconsciousness. I kind of regretted it though, because when I opened my eyes I found out that the smell wasn't coming from a copper mine (surprisingly), but rather a blood flowing from the gash on my face. Wait.. it was too much blood for it to have come from just me, and looking around I saw the hat guy on his side, facing away from me, and right next to me
