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  1. sandrewn

    Chapter 52

    Great chapter, thank you. Well he once disguised himself as a French seaman, it is not a stretch to imagine him in a French officers' uniform on a secret mission.
  2. Stellar By all means, sequel first. I usually go back to read a story again several years later. Yours I have already started to. Thanks for saving the kitten. I will let you know the count of that 2 / 14 thingy. Regards, Sandrewn
  3. sandrewn

    Epilogue

    Everything every one has said times ( X ) ten. The beginning pulled me in. The chapters lead me ever on. The end was satisfying to the extreme. With a little taste what might come. I will wait as long as it takes for more of your artistry. Best wishes and many thanks.
  4. sandrewn

    Leagues Of Night

    And then there were three. One door closes, another opens. Most important, humans are still there and in control? Why does this story have to end? Thank you ever so much.
  5. sandrewn

    Sunlight Unbound

    Two down, one not of this universe, the other bred, born and died here. What are our two becoming? I refuse to look ahead ( 20 & 21) until this is sent. Great chapter, thank you.
  6. sandrewn

    Part 25.

    As expected, its gets better and better, great chapter. What further position could the AIs next appoint him to. Beware the Rogue.
  7. I think 4 plus days of no posting in this forum is a depressing silence. Especially when I glance over to 'The Darkside' and see a veritable festival of interaction. While I would take a chapter a day from you, you would spoil us. Then when the real world reared its ugly head (as it must eventually) the withdrawl pains (the whining) would start again. Slow and steady, if you please, thank you.
  8. sandrewn

    Chapter 51

    I posted before I realized there was a new chapter awaiting me. I also was tracking the time to his second epaulette (darn). I have ridden there and in the Sinai on camel. As mentioned, the dry heat and that damn sand got in every where. The flies were everywhere (the unofficial National Bird of Egypt), you just get used to them. I really enjoyed this chapter, thank you. I think Granger is going to need his backup (J & J) sooner than later.
  9. This continuing silence is depressing. Here is a song I first heard over 40 years ago. Could we call it a musical interlude? A Clean Song (traditional) | Cantaria Folk Song Archive
  10. If you can maintain this level, its going to be a great story. Thank you.
  11. Ok, I screwed up with the xebecs. In all of the Middle East there had to be some pirates, most likely muslim, due to the region, that had craft (not xebecs) of some sort (I know, I'm beating a dead horse). Since my last there was one vote, so I guess my report of its' demise was a tad premature (but fading fast).
  12. I am thinking your last comment put an abrupt end to this poll. I have only one (really left field) thought. Bacchante becalmed in deep water, surrounded by a fleet of fifty xebecs. The end of Maidstone (and the letters) along with the loss of many of our beloved characters, the ship a Arab prize.
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    Chapter 50

    It took writer William Peter Blatty 122 min. movie. With neck twisting and power vomiting special affects, 'The Exorcist' (1973) won 2 Oscars and 4 Golden Globes. Your Exorcism with a mear 6,238 words laid not one demon, Jardines', but also Grangers' to rest. Blessings be upon you Mark.
  14. Thank you Westie, for a while there I thought we had time travelled and Vaudeville was alive and kicking. Not that I was around then, I wasn't even a gleam in my fathers' eye at the time.
  15. That would take out a third or more of the reviewers and over a quarter of the posters. Oh well, in for a penny, in for a pound. Its Major (not Lt) Jardines. Travers (R.I.P.) was provisional pending his completion of the ceremony and Arthur was his sponsor. Dead man walking (from the 'Green Mile',I really like that movie).
  16. Sir Francis Molyneux the current Black Rod. Rumored to be a member.
  17. Nice save, Mr Arbour.
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    Chapter 49

    Yes I have been to the Dark Side and I also think this chapter rivals (equals) any chapter there to date. It goes to show that even we The Loyal Crew can appreciate a chapter that has no battles, blood and/or gore every now and again. A truly compelling chapter. Thanks Mark.
  19. Thank you B1ue, however it was in regards to Capt Somers a Royal Marine for whom a question of Colonelcy was raised.
  20. It was mentioned Somers might purchase a Colonelcy. I became curious, what I found was that 1755 marked the date officers commissions in the marines were no longer allowed by purchase, but by regular rotation of seniority. Or is being a Governor away around that. Per Mare Per Terram - the Royal Marines 1793-1815 Before a found that article, I came across one that answered most of the questions I have had on all the terms and names used throughout this series. I think you, my fellow crewmates, would find most of yours answered with regards to naval life at that time and a better understanding of the story (my thought for what its worth). Royal Navy Customs and Traditions
  21. There appears to be a ground swell building of the opinion that Granger will win. Inspite of having to first Mata Hari his way through Egypt. Through the French army, then the French navy, meet up with Nelson and join the fight. Get a ship and catch up to or beat Maidstone home, who does have a two month lead. Wishful thinking? Speaking of nuts. Have you heard about deer nuts? They are inexpensive, under a buck.
  22. Since it is your story and you didn't mention Morningtons' messenger dispatched to Aleppo, he is out of it. Due to the Somer Monkey Wrench, Bacchante will be delayed. Allowing Santa Clarita to intercept, then reaching home first with Bacchante sailing in concert. Granger, due to your time frame will probably get involved with Nelsons' Battle, thus arriving home last. Note: I probably have it all wrong (usually do), time and the next few chapters will tell.
  23. sandrewn

    Chapter 48

    I have always liked Calvert (with all his imperfections). It was an excellent chapter, thank you. In the 205 chapters (to date) of the Bridgemont Series, all but 2 have had our Captian featured in them. These two (2) exceptions have occurred within the last four (4) chapters. I worry that we, His Loyal Crew, are being lead towards The Dark Side (The Followers of CAP).
  24. I am a sci fi buff, great chapter, great story, more please. Thank you.
  25. sandrewn

    Part 24.

    It is not a cliff hanger, but you are leading up to something. Kindly give give us some answers along with another chapter ASAP. Oops, I lost all self control for a second there. Great chapter, thank you.
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