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Topher Lydon

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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    You know Hugo has that power too, poor...poor Stoker
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Which will make Stoker do it more...
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    I love it, stealing that
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Library - Æuum – Echo Site Gun levelled, the Witchhunter was squarely in command of their situation. And Wojciech opened his mouth to speak, but held his tongue as he stared worriedly at Stoker, who appeared rattled by the fact that he had a gun pressed to the base of his skull. Wojciech’s gaze flickered over the man’s archaic garb – the heavy, dark coat, the severe cut of his beard, and especially the flintlock pistol, a weapon from centuries past.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 34

  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    writing chapter 34 now Chapter 33 has to be one of the most visceral and heat rending chapters I have ever written. So I am taking a moment for me with a cup of tea, chapters 34 and 35 are planned out. I can be honest and say I am not sure how many chapters I need for this (not so) little story, and I am debating if I should split it into two books. I am at a place right now where my instinct is to split it at 33 with a brutal cliffhanger. Starting book 2 with what would have been 34 and 35. The writer in me wants to keep going. But the authour in me can see the practicalities of doing it as a two-part/book story. I will wait for @Jeff Burton 's opinion, because he's got a feel for these things, and perspective I am lacking (too close to the story)
  7. Never say never again.
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 34

    I'mma let Captain Sterling keel haul him
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 4

    It is a shame about Marc, I really liked him as a character. It's just... Andrew. I struggled with how he could compete with the history and the bond that Will and Andrew have, and the more I fought against it with the writing, the more Andrew, the Character fought back and refused to let things go. There are times when I have control over the characters, situations and settings... there are times when they just write themselves. And when it comes to Will, Andrew writes his own narrative.
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 34

    Oh Poor Andrew's reputation will be ruined
  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 34

    OMG, you know that's the inspiration for the Falcon Banner, right?
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 34

    Andrew, last action hero
  13. HMS Acheron, Below, North Sea The HMS Acheron hung suspended, a massive, crippled prize now under the cold, unyielding iron fist of Bravo and his mercenaries. The Control Room, usually a vibrant hub of activity, pulsed with an eerie, emergency red glow, its consoles displaying the grim, static schematics of a wounded leviathan. Bound tightly to consoles and stanchions, the remaining skeleton crew – faces pale but eyes burning with defiance – watched, helpless, as Bravo asserted his chilling
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 33

    Good guys Win, Bad guys Lose, and England will Prevail!
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 2

    I hope the time line is fixed a bit better in this revision
  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    thou shalt not covet thy boyfriend's hat, unless it's Hugo's and then it's 100% Alec's hat now.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    And Stoker got his hat at last. And he isn't giving it back.
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Library - Æuum – Echo Site Fanning himself with his fedora, the brim casting a shifting shadow over his keen eyes, Wojciech walked around the deserted library floor again. Dust motes danced in the shafts of light filtering down from unseen sources above, illuminating the quiet decay of the vast space. The air, despite the heat, carried a strange, almost metallic scent, mingling with the faint smell of old paper and damp stone. The
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    But he's the secret master mind behind the whole plot!
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 33

    Stands in front of the curtain hiding the wizard from view. Nope, no person in there... nope no mistakes or fallibility... pay attention to the big giant talking head...
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 33

    Oh no, he's cracking the code, quickly minions, get him!
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 33

    Five more chapters. Chess pieces are in play. Now it's Templeman, Andrew, and Ezra's moves.
  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 33

    :: waggles coffee cup :: I'm up... I'm up... chapter... here... morning... I think
  24. Canada House, Trafalgar Square, London The grand, imposing doors of Canada House swung open with a slow, deliberate creak, revealing the maelstrom beyond. The pre-dawn quiet of Trafalgar Square was shattered by the sharp crackle of police radios, the low rumble of news vans, and the blinding flash of a dozen camera lenses. Will stepped out, his posture perfectly straight, his expression composed, even as the glare of the lights and the scrutiny of the world bore down on him. Police lin
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    I was thinking more that he did the dishes without thinking about it
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