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Hayden sat in the taxi next to her baby brother, her heart was filled with sorrow, uncertainty, fear and pride for Keith, all the ingredients forged a cold dagger piercing through her heart, causing ever more pain she had always felt for her brother. A special piece of memory from six years ago managed to sneak into her brain, and the image made her cringe. * “I HAVE HAD ENOUGH!” Hayden screamed at her parents in their living room, the fight that day had lasted for hours, and none of them co
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Thank you Lisa for the kind words, any encouraging words from myself sound fake and betrayal, but I do hope I am on the right track of life.
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It has been awhile since my last updates of my story, and I am sorry to keep you waiting. The second part of the story from chapter 18 was not supposed to be born. It was originally planned to be a happy ending at chapter 17, instead the smiles were written in grief and the happy reunion of Keith and Elliot was a desperate wish and a sorrowful call to a bitter reality. I hated the words in the end of chapter 17 and yet I loved it. One day I decided to wake up from the lie I knitted for myself
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The storm had finally ceased but the chaos it had created for the traffic would not disappear so easily for the next few days. Keith sat impatiently in the taxi back to his penthouse from the airport, his cellphone was soaked in sweat from the grab in his hand. The traffic did not seem to be moving at all, cars honked like a late Christmas chorus. The dream he had had two nights ago on his birthday tormented him at every living second, and Hayden’s phone call did not improve the situation at a
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Keith woke up with a sudden sensation of falling, he kept his eyes closed with grievous determination, and remembered the gentle push Elliot had put on his heart. He felt an excruciating pain sent from his chest to his whole body, and clenched onto the bed sheet with a disguised feeling of desperation which now turned into despair. The falling sensation continued but Keith gave up on any temptation of opening his eyes because even though the falling made him feel nauseous, the reality would feed
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Two weeks had gone by in Warsaw, Keith kept himself busy most of the time but that did not sooth his concern about Elliot back in London, he would call his sister more than five times a day to check on Elliot’s condition, and Hayden had been very patient and supportive with him. Today after a lecture which took eight hours to finish, Keith went to have dinner with his classmates and sent his sister a text message during the dinner. Hayden didn't reply, Keith started to get anxious but then th
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Thank you as always for the support. You might have noticed the changing of the tone when the story developed, well, the reason would be another story within this one. Keith feels nervous at leaving Elliot, but also guilty, but Hayden is right, he needs a small break, he has to be strong for him and his love
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It had been one week, one day before Christmas eve, but Elliot still had not waken up, the coma seemed to deepen, together with the sorrow in those loved ones. Keith had barely left the hospital except going back to his place for shower and fresh cloth, every day and night he sat next to Keith, talking to him, whispering him things, making sketches of the life he imagined to have with Elliot after he woke up, he held hope tight within himself and he knew Elliot would return. Keith woke up alo
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I also hope both Keith and Elliot including Jasper will be set free from their past, hopefully they will all walk through the pain and finally find the light that has always been there
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I apologize for all the tears that are shed Pain demands to be felt for Keith, maybe it will be a changing point for him, maybe he will be more protective about his feelings if worse developed to the worst...
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Elliot leaned in Jasper’s shoulder, time seemed to have stopped and he wanted this moment to last for eternity, everything seemed to be frozen except his heart was pounding painfully against his chest, all the memories buried deep surfaced again, bringing out both pain and warmth, and killed Elliot gently from inside. “Where are we?” Elliot finally stopped his tears and asked. “In our world.” Answered Jasper. “Our world?” “Yes, it’s our world, the one you have created, the one we have be
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Justina came next day around eight in the morning, she brought some breakfast her mom had made earlier especially for Keith and Elliot's mom and coffee she had picked up on the way. Keith and Elliot’s mom were both sitting on each side of the sickbed, nobody had been saying anything but staring at their loved one lying unconsciously on the bed. “Hey,” Justina pushed in and passed them the breakfast and coffee, “How is he?” Her eyes were bloodshot and forced a smile on her face. “We don’t kno
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the words "let go", as the title of this story, first appeared in this chapter, this was one of the hardest chapters for me to write, and truth be told, I still get myself in tears when I read it myself Thanks for the genuine review Lisa
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“Where am I?” Elliot looked around but his vision could not penetrate anything through the thick fog surrounding him. He attempted to fumble around with his hand but except the ghosts of fog there was nothing around. Elliot started to feel nauseous at the emptiness, he shouted at the top of his lung but his voice did not echo, and there was no reply. After what felt like forever, a voice suddenly reached Elliot’s ear. Elliot’s heart clenched hard. He could never forget this voice no matter ho
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I agree Keith shouldn't have listened to Erasmo, but Erasmo's words were like a confirmation of his long confusion of the distant feeling he had been having from Elliot, and at that moment I guess Keith was too much hurt to think rationally anymore about his relationship, especially when he had problem with confronting others about his feelings
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Keith did not have time to gasp for breath after he found Albert, Justina and Elliot’s parents were waiting outside of the surgery room, a few police officers were just about to leave. His heart clenched when he saw the piercing red light on above the surgery room. “What happened?! How is he? IS HE IN THERE? IS HE OK? CAN SOMEONE SAY SOMETHING?” Keith’s voice was shaking out of fear. Justina came and hugged Keith, her eyes were red and tear marks on her face were still visible, Keith stared
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Keith was about to go in for a bath when his phone suddenly started to ring, his heart leaped and groped for it under his cloth on the bed, but only to find it was from his two years older sister Hayden, who was currently doing her language exchange program in Shanghai. “Hey Keith, how are you?” Hayden sounded very pleased at hearing her younger brother’s voice. “I’m doing fine sis, how is Shanghai?” Keith was not sure whether he wanted to open his heart already over the phone. “Fabulous a
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“I’m sorry Albert, I fell asleep again while I was reading in bed.” Keith curled up his small body under the cover that was way too big for him, he tried to block the shining sun with the cover and his burning eyes begged for more time to sleep. The bed was enormous for him. Albert looked at Keith affectionately and pulled back the curtain, he didn't notice any book by the night stand. “I will remember to switch them off tonight. Please don't tell mom and dad.” Keith promised, he looked lik
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Keith woke up on his bed, he rolled over and looked up at the big digital clock screen on the wall to register the time, it was 1 o'clock in the afternoon. Shit I’m late for the meeting with Dr. Quentin! But he did not hold on to that thought long, soon Keith realized that was not the only thing he should be concerned about. He was supposed to go meet Dr. Quentin the scientist around 10 in the morning, with Elliot. Oh right, Elliot. Everything started flashing back like a slide show, he
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"Did you see his face?" Keith collapsed with laughter once he was out of the club, "Did you see how he looked like when he said 'Call me sometime'?" "Yea, not a good move." Dustin admitted, He knew perfectly why Keith probably would never contact Ian again. "Because he asked you to call him?" Edwin asked confusedly. "Yes, but that's only what appears on the surface, not the essential," Keith lectured, "When I had that small conflict with Dustin in the before party, he didn't stand out, tha
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Elliot was playing on the stage, facing the audiences but with his eyes closed, he always did so when he was on the show, he claimed his eyes would only lock on the one he loved when he played music and felt music became cheap when it had to serve so many people. Occasionally he opened his eyes and cast a gentle look on Jeremy who was sitting among the fancy dresses and gorgeously-done hairstyle. Elliot pulled the string softly, this brought him back to the day he met Keith... then the melody
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People had started leaving to the club now, Keith was still talking with Ian, he looked around the house looking for Dustin and was surprised to find him heading out with a stranger without him. Ian clearly saw through everything with his author instinct, but also knew it was better not to put it into words, not if he still wanted to keep his date tonight. "Shall we go, too?" Ian suggested. "Yea." Keith attempted a smile and put his empty glass on the table. Walking on the Greek Street nea
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Everyone goes to parties for one reason, but when your hand is in the bag, sin feels the same as joy, and alcohol will mix them to a rosemary drink. Of course, Keith didn't go shopping with Dustin this afternoon, he wanted to get back to his drawings today. Keith at the moment was studying in Royal College of Art in London, meanwhile he was a big fan of Bill Watterson the author of Cavlin and Hobbes. He always wanted to create his own story in the same style, so far he was still working on the
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"Hi Elliot!" Keith had already taken a shower and got dressed when he dialed Elliot's number. "Hey baby, I was just calling you earlier." Elliot put down his violin and poured himself some Bushmills. "Yea I got your message, and sure we still stick to our plan for tomorrow," Keith said, "I'm quite curious what Dr. Quentin will show us this time." Keith threw himself on the Coaster Victoria Leather Sofa in the living room. "Anything from his lab should be good, that man's got the thoughts o
