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"I have a can of mace and I know how to use it" lol. Yeah, that was a great line. I too would love to read more of this. Juan.

Great chapter LBTW . Cant wait for the consert and to see what happens in Las Vegas (What happens in Las Vegas, stays in Las Vegas). I too am weried about Toby. Now that I remember he dose smokes, hope nothing bad happens to him . Juan.

Thanks Bobby. Juan

Ok so I got a day and so left to chap 15. So it gives me a few time to go back to the story and chek out who Eleanor ven epps is cuz I think I skiped him . I dont know who to vote for im stuk with connor, Rayn, and toby. But Ill deside that latter Im going back to read . Juan Ps. Can some one please tell me wat chap Eleanor came up on.

I think theres more to Trent than his bully stile. I think Trent has a reason to all this bully, maybe his been bullied befor and now his tired of being piked on. Or maybe its his parents. For wat weve read his got expensive clothes and a BMW (those cars have expensive parts). So to get all this you need money and he probably dosent work so maybe his mom and dad do and he dosent have time with them wish that can make a kid very selfish and some times a jerk (more known as an asshole) but Im just thinking so no one is sure till LBTW tells us. But he can allsow just be an ass cuz he wants to. I soooo need to smoke chap 14. Juan

Ok, I love this chapter like I loved the other 12 (not so much ch.11). But its going pretty good. BUUUT!!! Good dosent stay for long in anyones lifes. SO! I think that if someone is going to adopt Connor its way to easy to be put in with Maggie (wich we all know that, that might not happen) and to be put in with Cody's mom is easy too (not much people are adopted by their friend's mom). SO! I think Trent Lomax parents might adopt Connor . I dont know for some reason thats what Im thinking. Maybe cuz we need to find more to Trent than what we know and thats the only way (I think). But he can be adopted by a new caracter to the story. For what some of us think its not going to be a very happy place for him (this is a good reason for Trent's parents to adopt cuz some body in this new family is not going to make him all that happy). Well we ever get to know why Connors mom was such a b****? Cuz shes dead so how well we. Unless we meet the reason to it wich I think its Connor's dad. Ok for some reason I want to know what happend to his dad or are we ever going to find out on one of the chapters? Ok I soooo need to relax, Ok I cant, hope the answer comes up soon. Well keep up the good work LBTW . I think blackmailing Kitty is a very bad idea with the chapters on her hands , keep up the good work too Kitty. Well, hope this post isent as dumb as my first on ch.11 :wacko: . Juan

Oooooh! yeah forgot that he was 25 .

Ok this is my firts time writing anything here. LBTW youre a grate writer . The way you have put SOOTB to be like the real world, showing the truth of every corner of our world is actualy very thoughtfull. Some people thought that chap 11 was desterbing or very desterbing but its how the world is now adays with some childrens and teenagers bieng abused. Anyways, you said that you dont think Kurl was Connor mom's boyfriend . Ok I was wondering since you never spoke about Connor's father . . . is Kurl, Connor's father? The reason on why I think this was bcuz Connor's mom never hurt him just threaten him (while Kurl was there) and well . . . that comment you left. Hope chap 13 is out soon too (Kitty do youre magic and make him post it soon too) cuz Im very adicted . Juan